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fan-rei
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
i rerading your fic and i'm wondering why kendra's father wasn't affected by the fey gene. were the spirit already trying something? but then they would have know of the spells... so how this camnore branch of the family was spared?
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 23
Wow... just WOW. So happy there is a sequel!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 22
Chilling chapter, you really know how to capture the emotional intensity of the moment and get it across to the readers.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 21
Bloody hell my heart is a thumping!! Great chapter.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 20
Fantastic work with the visuals i that chapter.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 19
Wonderful work in describing the gliding lessons. Also like the every summer bit when in her hybrid form.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 18
I find myself on the edge of my seat wait for them to get back home. I do like that though you are making them both powerful they're not uber powerful. Good work.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 17
The rewrite of the history was very well thought out. Great work!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 16
Can't wait to see those two glide!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 15
What a complex tapestry of words you have and are weaving. Loving every chapter!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 14
Very solid story line and love how you are doing the spirits. Reminds me of several books on paganism that I read.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 13
Oh bloody interesting and awesome chapter!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 12
What an in depth history and plot you are weaving, bloody good writing there!

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 11
Simply love the dynamics of Kendra's and Demona's growing relationship.

Wispr
Wispr
2008-12-07 . chapter 10
Very loving chapter, fantastic writing!

Wispr
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