 fan-rei 2009-01-14 . chapter 3i rerading your fic and i'm wondering why kendra's father wasn't affected by the fey gene. were the spirit already trying something? but then they would have know of the spells... so how this camnore branch of the family was spared? |
 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 23Wow... just WOW. So happy there is a sequel!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 22Chilling chapter, you really know how to capture the emotional intensity of the moment and get it across to the readers.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 21Bloody hell my heart is a thumping!! Great chapter.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 20Fantastic work with the visuals i that chapter.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 19Wonderful work in describing the gliding lessons. Also like the every summer bit when in her hybrid form.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 18I find myself on the edge of my seat wait for them to get back home. I do like that though you are making them both powerful they're not uber powerful. Good work.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 17The rewrite of the history was very well thought out. Great work!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 16Can't wait to see those two glide!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 15What a complex tapestry of words you have and are weaving. Loving every chapter!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 14Very solid story line and love how you are doing the spirits. Reminds me of several books on paganism that I read.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 13Oh bloody interesting and awesome chapter!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 12What an in depth history and plot you are weaving, bloody good writing there!
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 11Simply love the dynamics of Kendra's and Demona's growing relationship.
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 Wispr 2008-12-07 . chapter 10Very loving chapter, fantastic writing!
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