That was an awesome spin and an avenue that I never even imagined.

Thank you.

Love Sonia :)

Superb!! I love it! You are extremely talented! Dumbles would have been outraged at Hermione being told but in reality nothing else would have kept Hermione from finishing those books.

I like the 'no Muggleborns' idea, but Hermione kiled her own mother?? :(

Jeez, for a minute there I thought Trelawney was her mother...

I like the idea of Muggleborns really just being the children of wizards and witches that thought they were Squibs and got rid of them. It's fresh and interesting.

The last line was excellent.

Duckie(:

That last line is 24-carat solid GOLD.

I love this story -- the idea of all 'muggleborn' witches and wizards being children given up by ashamed pureblood parents is an interesting one...it casts the Wizarding World in a darker light. And I am all for exposing the flaws in a utopia. ^_^

Excellent work!

~~Schiz

goodness. i just love this story. i have read it multiple times and i just love the idea of snape being a distant father to her and there being a strange relationship between the two of them as implied in this story. and then that ending! i love it. i both think it is the perfect ending and wish it doesnt end... :)

Well done.

Great story.

I love a happy ending!

:D

LMAO..."My father taught me that one" o...grat one.

SVSD

Now why dont more people write Snape/Hermione stories that are father/daughter? I loved this! I have been reading this ship for years and I have never come across another one. Color me impressed.

Hmm...
Interesting take on Hermione. I like the 'no Muggleborns' idea, which is really very unique and interesting. Very interesting.
And while Severus really starts getting OOC by the end, I still liked him.

-Arciere

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I really liked this oneshot. I admire your ability to go into the political and cover up aspects of the wizarding world in your writing. If you ae a fan of father daughter relationships between hermione and severus i recommend you check out my c2 which your story will be added to or even some of my own works.
again good job.

Brittany Jane.

Nice plot. Could have been a longer fic, at least three times as long. Glad that Hermione was strong enough to commit matricide in the end.

Btw, you forgot to add the line "Not that she had ever wanted to pursue anything further with her moRonic friend" after "This even explained why Harry always had felt like a brother to her while Ron never did. Harry was her cousin."

i word WOW! i loved it! it was soo good!

I would be horrified if that had been me. Not because snape was my dad, but because bellatrix was my mother!!