Oh, wow. This was really depressing...and disturbingly graphic. Naw, not really. Just...shudder-inducing.

I almost smiled when I realized where the inspiration for the idea came from. World Cultures can be really helpful, huh?

I spotted one sentence in the wrong verb tense, but other than that, everything was fine. I think you did brilliant for an uncommonly longer fic.

Poor Jack. That last sentence was truly depressing. But, ya know, if you think about it he will continue to live through the ages and, eventually, he'll meet up with the team again...once they're born, that is. Next time, he'll just have to be careful with the time-warping device. It puts a little sunshine on the otherwise gloomy scene.

Great job as per usual.

Oh God! No! That made me cry, poor Jack losing his team slowly, and having to bury them! It was tragic, but wonderfully written.

I was crying by the end. It's really depressing, but really good.

Hi!
To be honest, I didn't really lke this story, but that's because it's kinda depressing. It is however really well written; well done!!
Anna.

Hope that never happens poor Jack honestly I think he would have died with them all.
Maria