as far as critisism, just proofread a little more. definitely a lot of drama, but that's what makes the story more interesting i guess. sequel?? for sure! keep up your writing!!

no i didn't like reading it. sorry. i LOVED it! you're a great writer. the poem and flashback was a great touch. i'm looking forward to your next story. and im glad she ended up with hayden.

LOVED THIS CHAPTER TOO! mr. allens better go!

ah! too many guys!! i can't believe hayden still loves her... i just hope all ends well with whoever she chooses. she can only have ONE. hope mr. allens comes around

didn't see that one coming... hayden being roomies with sean

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! finally!! the orchestra and her remembering her dad was the prefect touch. you're a great writer ya know. =)

i feel for andrew... but then again he should have known better. i have to say that i'm i little disappointed that the story won't keep going after high school. oh well

Hope she starts up with her music pretty soon. she's not complete without it. it's nice that the doctor is trying to look out for her... he's being more of a parent than her mom. guess i'll soon find out why. hayden's back!

Her stepdad is so awesome. he's really good to jody and her mom. i'm reall happy that they're friends again. i still love that you use songs for the beginning of each chapter!

i can't believe her...! what? no starbucks with the panda express?? lol

you were right, mentioning all the guys was a nice touch. why does she go for any guy that shows an interest?? i'm not complaining that the story will go past high school. it's good, keep writing!

yeah... the easy friendship was too good to last. maybe with time it'll work again. a car?! sweet! =)

another guy is after jody... does it ever stop?? jk. i wasn't really expecting the renewal of irene and jody's friendship.. new twist. hope it lasts. oh and oliver needs to figure out what he wants

hey what the heck?
wheres my thank u?

wow gen, i like the whole "no sex on the field" comment that was funy i i'm really liking your story and how olivers just there.

wow gen you would put starbucks in your story and i feel bad for the brother, i like this chapter.