I love this :'3 alot. I loved how you portrayed Matt's personality, I also love your writing style :D good job.
Plus, the way you portrayed Matts personality made me smile through the whole thing, oh, Matsy, you adorable gamer, you XD

I just wanna say, yuo should write past tense next time, for example...
"He sits up" should be "He sat up." neverless, grand job


~Macy

Absolutely love this. Something about your writing style, and how you portrayed Matt's personality was just lovely. I also thought you stuck to the charactars grandly.

Must add, though, you should try writing past tense. Like..For example.
"He sits up"
Should be "He sat up." :'3 neverless, awesome job.

hello, this is Matt n L tlakin ta ya! well, L toled me 2 tell u that he said "this story is good, but missing alot of the LxMatt drama that happened in wammys...(eats cherry)and it made Matt look gay since she is a chick and + she kinda is lyk, misa's adopted sis since she is Mello's full sis" ok that is what L just said, and I am a girl and I am Matt, over all~ GREAT JOB!!(gives u Mello)have fun!:D:D(runs awya b4 mello gets mad)X3


sighned with insaneity and luf
-Matt&L

Ooh, I like that. The fact that the food is what triggers the memory, not what someone says or something. It's more substantial, and, in my opinion, more realistic.
And, of course, I love the Matt/Misa. I would ask you to write another oneshot for it, because I really can't get enough of it, but I don't know if I know you well enough to do that. >.> All I am is a fan of yours who leaves reviews. xD
Anyways, Matt, Misa, L and candy all make for an awesome oneshot, and I love more. Moar plz? ^_^

As out of whack as this is... you know... I really kind of liked it. Damn, I really kind of liked it a lot. Not necessarily for the awkward pairings (lawl), but for the cleverness in the way it's set up, and the way Matt is remembering the now-deceased L and how it's making him feel bitter. Ruining his cherry lolipop.

Nicely freakin' done, missy.

Crack pairs are the best thing ever. Beautifully done, as always.

I offically love you for LxMatt. I didn't think it existed. :) Very well written.

MattxL. Never thought of that one before. But it was cute. And the way you portray MisaxMatt is, like always, just right! Loved it!

I absolutely loved this. Your writing style... is just so amazing. And, though I have this weird Misa complex (I like her a lot but...) I normally refrain from reading fics where she's, like, involved with anyone. In fact, I typically avoid her in fics altogether. I have no idea why. But you made it absolutely enjoyable in every way.
And the part with L... perfect.
I envy you, seriously.
*favorites this*

I loved it!