*grin* I laughed my head off at their interactions in the beginning. Nicely done!

Even though you wrote this a bajillion months ago, can I still make your day by reviewing? XD

I loved it! The opening was awesome and the end -wipes away drool- heh. >>

XD

i liked the integration of chakra in this - 'felt his chakra go haywire'. it was an interesting twist i've never seen before ;)

Haha, this was cute! You managed to maintain Sasuke's and Naruto's character (..somewhat) and have a cute little story. I honestly kept smiling every time Sasuke got annoyed. It's fun to think of an annoyed Sasuke and silly NAruto :D

Sorry; Em is posting another review.

It seemed a lot like your usual Naruto and Sasuke moment when Naruto came home. It was not all happy and girly that sometimes is laid down in a fanfiction. Naruto had a high and a low point and then another high point. I am pretty sure Naruto would come in with some comment that would get him nearly killed.

The kiss between the two was described quite well. It was not just a 'Sasuke kissed Naruto hard and he moaned' sort of thing. There was some sort of feeling in it and a clear spark between the two.

In other words, it made me feel fuzzy.
-Em

I really liked it there were a few parts were I was trying not to laugh my a** off 8)

Aw, so sweet i wanna vomit. But in a good way. XD

~Naomi

Sasuke should realize Naruto wouldn't understand why he'd gone to his place without some sort of hint given beforehand. Much as I love Naruto, he's not the most observant most of the time.

Aww! That's so sweet! It made me smile like the obsessed SasuNaru fangirl I am. xD I love it!

Valentine's Day weirds me out. The whole concept is just ... "LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU IN CHOCOLATE AND HALLMARK CARDS!" Makes no sense, really. But this was good. These guys are people! Who act like guys! In a sweet way! I secretly adore fluffy things, so this was very much appreciated. (Whut? Cavities? No wai.) And, well, love. Love, love, love. :) The "I came here for you" line was the clincher, I think. Just ... ah! And even though you despise it, I'm going to say it anyway. Happeh V-day! (Five days late, but it's the thought that counts.) :D

That was cute! Very well written and believable...It made my Valentines a little bit better!

Obsessive

i actually hate valentine's day as well. i wore all black today.
i gotta say, i loved this! and for several reasons too. It was extremely tastefully done. Funny, cute, and well written. i really like your style, gotta say it's sophisticated and descriptive. nice work!

giggle squee! I have nothing much to say, I'm sorry! Except that this made me not hate V day as much as I usually do and it was sweet and I said E! when I read it. It was so cute :3

aww, ^^

yay i hate vday too but i still loved the fic lol good job