|Reviews for On Needing|
| Melissax3 2/14/08 . chapter 1
i really like it
is this going to be a long story? like 10 chapters...or more like 3?
| hellobaby 2/13/08 . chapter 1
It's great to see that you're back, and I'm thrilled to read your new story.
I hope you find time in your busy schedule to update soon.
| angelgrl 2/13/08 . chapter 1
what? that was wierd. the part with the twins and patience and twin brothers. im pretty sure that that will be later explained. i really like your comparisons, especially when you compared the sun to her watch. that was nice. just remember to watch out for your tenses. i just spotted a tiny mistake in here, nothing big, but just cautioning you and i wish you a happy valentine's day too. welcome back to fanfiction!
| dreaming.sapphire 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Wow, I'd love to see more of this. _
| mintxrain 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Im confused on the paitience and charm thing... Is the dude cute or something?
| filofobiklaz 2/13/08 . chapter 1
omg.. im soo glad you're back! im a huge fan of your fics.. though i don't usually write reviews.. i made one just
to welcome you back. ) ..i really loove how you write your stories. _
| Jill-kun 2/13/08 . chapter 1
awesome cant wait for it to be continued
| LaylaPlum 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Oh wow. ] Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Lutralutra 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Interesting beginning, foreshadowing lots of great writing to come. Ah, cold Neji, rejecting Tenten's pure-hearted advances (gah, I sound like Lee). But we all know there's more to the relationship than a "no".
“Do you have other plans for tonight?” He knew there was none; it was his veiled way of stating, ‘Did you just say ‘no’ to me?’.
Love that - it's so Neji. He's really quite direct and unspoken once you learn to look past the crypticness. Great characterization, smooth dialogue.
I'll be waiting for an update from one of the best-loved NejiTen authors on FF. Keep up the good work! :)
| afaphyte 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Woah. panu kaya un nangyari? guess i'll have to wait for the next and last chapter. (well you did mention that it was a two-part story, right?)
as usual, magaling ka parin magsulat, pero namimiss ko ung mga sobrang nakakatwa mong lines na nilalagay mo sa fics. XD
Grabe, ate syao, reyna ka talaga ng pambibitin. XD napansin ko lang, halos lahat ng reviews ko sau di mawawala ung "grabe nabitin ako!" or something close to that. XD namiss kita ate syao! namiss ko mga fanfics mo! :D nung nakita ko nanaman ung penname mo sa inbox ko, kinilabutan nanaman ako. haha.
alam m ba (wala lang, ikukwento ko narin) na ung chicharong flower, narevive uli sa classroom namin, at pati ung mga di nanonood ng naruto nagandahan at sobrang kinilig dun sa fic. XD grabe talaga ang abilidad mo sa pagsusulat. nakakaamaze. XD
okay, mejo mahaba-haba na ito. god bless sa work mo ate syao! ingat din! :D aabangan ko ung next chapter ng "On Needing" XD
| Clow Angel 2/13/08 . chapter 1
What the heck! Twin? *feels faint* By the way, great characterization. _
| Shikyo no Amatsu Shinsei 2/12/08 . chapter 1
okaay...that last bit made me laugh..i was thinking, WTH? LOL!
i like this story, i hope u update soon! :D