|Reviews for Gilded Prison|
| Guest 9/8/11 . chapter 1
send her back! send her back!
| assiage 5/11/10 . chapter 1
Let me just start off by saying that this story was extrememly well-written and exceptionally moving. You definately have a flair for writing and emotions. It was very well done, I tip my hat to you!
That being said, I love angst like anyone else, but it was so tragic! Even moreso than the stories of our lovely couple dying. It kinda put me into a funk, to be frank :c I know how compelling their story is to everyone, especially (considering) how it ended tragically.
I don't suppose you could ever... I don't know... write a follow up of them reuniting? Pretty please? Hehe this one-shot moved me deeply, my dear, I would love to read some more of your work. If I'm not mistaken you had a multi-chaptered story up that I was fond of, then you took it down.
Keep writing! TC- Stef
| silke f 5/10/10 . chapter 1
so so sad ... very good
| AJV78 4/2/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful story, very tragic and heartfelt, my heart goes out to Alice. Hope you have a companion piece in mind from Uncas point of view, I'd love to read that.
| Eros ex Nihilo 2/15/10 . chapter 1
wah, so sad. i'm not sure why i identify more with her character than Cora, since Cora was a much stronger female character. I always had a soft spot for Alice. i guess she kind of reminds me of my little sister a bit. anyway, nicely done once again!
| Chaco 2/26/09 . chapter 1
I think you should continue this story. It has a lot of potential.
| my blue castle 2/20/09 . chapter 1
This is wonderful, sad and even more wonderful! It made me cry when they both died in the movie, especially since I so wanted them to find happiness with each other. You've captured it all so beautifully. Thank you
| pepperlils 2/16/09 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this story. Leave it the way it is - even though a part of me wants to beg you for a happy ending, the bittersweet taste of this one-shot makes it (near)perfect.
I could actually see this happening: Alice thinking she belonged in London, only to find her heart lies in America, and not being able to return. It is sad, but true.
| Cassandra30 9/30/08 . chapter 1
Take her back! She has to go back!
| Luckynumber28 7/24/08 . chapter 1
very well written little one shot, keep it the way it is! a love story is so much better if the couple is unable to be together
| lightxbright 4/15/08 . chapter 1
Love it, but it's so sad... REUNITE THEM!
| celine 2/19/08 . chapter 1
You captured Alice in her "wonderland" of a gilded prison so perfectly.
| really 2/13/08 . chapter 1
Oh, how could you? What a horrible read (written so beautifully, quite naturally)! You realise you must write a follow-up to this, in which they reunite? You're obligated to now, I'm afraid. I expect to see one promptly! :)
(And I do most genuinely mean that.)