And the brilliance continues! Now, I'm afraid this is going to be another short and useless review (because part three is calling!!) but I do want to take a tick to note that you really have me sold on the Doctor and Richard's relationship. This is kinda surprising to me, because I thought I hated slash, but as it turns out I just hate how forced and artificial most slash is. How wonderful that their relationship here is neither! Also, I love the family as a whole. They need each other, and they fit together so well. :) Ok, now, on to part three!

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Once again...I'm back! I swear I was actually loosing my sanity at the end of the fifth day straight with no internet connection. Just got caught up...again! I love where you're going with this and am definatly going to be reading your next instillation (sp?) in these mini-series you have. Seriously, you have definately got an epic here. ^.^ You give depth and twists and turns to a totally cohesive plot line and I just know all your stories are this well written. So, whenever you continue with the next story I'll be waiting and reading. :)

Read ya later...

aarrgghh, bad Andy!, BAD!
tho you did warn us it was gonna be a cliffie ^_^

please place my vote on the tomorrow column, for the next thrilling mutation of your godzilla sized plot bunny.

as always, love the depth of characterization, looking forward to Jayne encountering Harley & her sick @#$ brother. He aught to enjoy them since Dobson's such a wimp.

lovely as always, cheers later - mirth
(banana flavored jelly babies, yechcy) ^_^

I love it! My husband drinks the same kind of sludge, if you leave the spoon in it, it dissolves! I think he has an adamantium stomach lining to go with his lead-lined head. Wonderful interplay with the characters (making fun of Mal), humor is always good. Looking forward to the next installment. Cheers, later - mirth

NO!! You so better post the next bit tomorrow! You can't leave our intrepid crowd at the mercy of Reavers and say oh gee now I'm going to end the part. You are so bad! I hope the Doctor plagues you mercilessly to write the next bit that's almost as bad as leaving the Doctor in misery from a gormum Dalek plague. *Grabs 2 bags of Jelly babies and sulks* a week indeed hrupphh

That was a very evil cliffhanger! At any rate, I absolutely loved this fic and I can't wait until the sequel.

love this line:
“You mean, like my being a time traveler, or that my ship is in your cargo bay on idle, or that Rose here is from 2005? No, not really.” Mal gives the pale man a hard look, trying to discern if he’s joking or serious. He can’t tell and that bothers him.

Quite the pill to swallow for captain Mal and if I have any clue how things play out he will and come back for seconds. This is going to be o so interesting seeing how he comes to terms with it all.

Really have to wonder if the rest of the box is on that ship. Hm. Very very interesting

*Grabs another bag of Jelly Babies and starts looking for Banana ones* Now if there isn't any, there sure as heck should be!

As always yet another delightful chapter.

Wonderful story, looking forward to more.

Oh that was delightful, love to see a happy Doctor, particuarly a happy 9 Doctor.

I love these lines:

“Dad, common English, please?” Simeon said.

“That was common English.”

“No, it wasn’t,” Jacob protested.

So VERRY Doctor! Inara's reaction to the Doc is quite interesting too.

I'd forgotten about Dobson shooting Kaylee, guess i need to go back and watch Firefly. I'm guessing that the transfusion has upset the balance with the parasite again, along with a few other guesses i'm keeping mum about. ^_^ whoo-hoo, what a ride! Love the fact that you've got Wash showing some real intelligence, instead of just being Zoe's playmate and comedy relief. Also like that you're giving Jayne depth that really didn't come out in the series until after a certain threat. As always lovely! Thanks for the fun and the jelly babies. Cheers, later - mirth

Oh my the plot thickens yet again. This is going to be a VERY interesting conversation coming up can't wait to see how you play this one out!

Grabs bag of Jelly Babies and sits back to enjoy the fireworks.

Yikes! Oh Dobson is so going to pay for that! It will be best for that cruiser too if it never catches them Thete will not brook any interfearance with his. Dobson is so dead, the only question now is how long it's going to take.

Wow what a way to to jump back in on a monday morning! Intense amaziing and I really really can't wait to see what happens next.

That was a very exciting chapter. But, poor Kaylee! I did NOT expect her to get shot.

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Real life got in the way. :) But, I'm still a faithful reader, and I still love this fic to death.