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| lepidopteran 2008-04-27 ch 6,  | abuseaww. loved it! so sad though :( the ending was really sweet :D and i loved that it didnt disregard the rest of the story - it fit in really well. |
| spinkle22 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseAw! Man, this is really good. I love how you did the whole flashback thing in the middle :P |
| kat priestley 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseThe ending was soo sweet!! I really liked this fic |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseWOW! That was so good! I loved Amber's little speech, so perfect! And the ending of course :p. I loved this fic, brilliant for the challenge, really good! Elle xx |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-08 ch 5, | abuseAw wow I cried! You wrote this SO well I can't quite believe it! Really brilliant writing, truly brilliant! Elle xx |
| x.Princess.Eli.x 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abuseoh god that was a really good chapter please look at my Alpha Force story! it's called Alpha Force: FIGHTING BACK... |
| kat priestley 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abusethis was so good - im actually in tears... you wrote that so well i could imagine it clearly in mind... brilliant |
| x.Princess.Eli.x 2008-03-02 ch 4, | abusehey do you wanna write some pauloli? pleasE? =] i like your story |
| kat priestley 2008-03-01 ch 4, | abusereally good!! |
| Elledreamer 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuseAw this is so cool, I really can't wait to read more :p Elle xx |
| Elledreamer 2008-02-25 ch 3, | abuseOh I liked this. Great set up! It's just the waiting now! I love how you drag your readers into your stories - so great! Elle xx |
| kat priestley 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseI really really like this! (Even though you killed my fav - lol) I like the idea if a flashback and i love all the interactions (especially the hex/amber ones) ... hope you update soon |
| kat priestley 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseaaw no!! ALex is dead!! The first chapter was so sad, you write the emotions really well. Hope you update soon i really want to find out what happened!! Brill!! |
| Elledreamer 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseOh it's getting interesting. This is so exciting but it's really strange reading it lol cos we know what will happen. I love the build up, this is really good, keep it up. Elle xx |
| Elledreamer 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOh my God you killed Alex and this is so amazingly brilliant! Wow! Just what I had in mind with the challenge, you've written it so well! I saw when the page loaded it wasn't Li, Paulo or Amber but then I was scrolling down really slowly to see who it would be. I'm admitting I did cry a bit, you wrote it so well Oh my God this is so brilliant. I can't describe it! I'm so happy I love this fic already and you're such a good writer! Yay! Elle xx |