Loved every bit of it! The characterizations of all the characters were spot on, and I absolutely loved this part were Luke described the harvest:

"So you help your uncle with the farm?" Ben asked casually as he pulled out a sand colored poncho from his expansive old chest.

"Every day." Luke replied with a nod from where he sat perched on the edge of the counter, legs swinging idly back and forth. "Sometimes it's hard cause it's like nothing seems to be happening at all, there's just sand, sand, and more sand and then harvest comes and poof! Everything's suddenly alive."

Great story and suprisingly deep. :)

A great story. Very good.

I really enjoyed that! It was a great idea, and you pulled it off well!

wow this is one of the oldest stories I have ever reviewed. I just wanted to say that Beru and owen's character were very well written, and that's saying something because i don't really care for them much. This was a really good piece of work. BITD

Aw, what a beautiful piece once again, fyre :) By any chance, was it inspired by a certain scene in Children of the Jedi? It really reminded me of when Luke thinks about something similar in his past, so I was truly glad to finally find a story about that particular Force accident in his life :) Great characterizations, terrific action, and bittersweet secrets... What more can a girl ask for ;)

More of your stories, of course ;P

Keep up the great job!

Love

Mireille ='.'=

hehehe. yep! like father, like son! a 'course luke could race! his dad did it at 9! ^

now i know why your so good your in the same luge as nuterl

Wow. This story just totally blew me away. All of the characters are so true to canon - not just in the facts but in their thinking and attitudes - that it is so easy to connect them with the Luke, Ben, etc. that we see in ANH.

I'm not sure what else to say, but I really did love this story. And I'm going to read some of your other stories.

I loved the way you portrayed little Luke. So innocent and clueless as to his "uncle's" attitude toward his abilities. I loved the validation he got from Obi-Wan. He would have been so much more self-assured if he could have had more of Obi's influence growing up. However it does give writers a chance to develope Luke angst over the years! Still writing Star Wars? Could you be convinced to , if you aren't right now? If so, please e-mail me and let me know. I loved this!

This was an extremely well written story, I really like the characterization on Luke and Ben. A thouroughly enjoyable story, my compliments.

That was a terrific story! Very well-written! I give it 5 stars!

Well, I told you so in the mail but a second time around can't hurt ;)

This one is definitly your best from all the Stat Wars stories you have written. I will read the Sentinel if I will finally find a decent homepage that explains the series to someone who has never had a chance to watch a single episode:(

BTW did you write any Pretender stories, next to the ones I already have *grin*

My the Force be with you (hey I know it is!) :)

Excellent work, you really held on to a six year olds perspective. It's harder to write for children than adults and you wrote, in addition to a realistic Luke, a convincing child. It's a little sad though, Luke seems mentally abused almost. You just want Ben Kenobi to punch Owen.

I give it a 10! This is *exactly* what I see Luke's childhood being like... I hope this author keeps writing!

Insightful, introspective...best characterization I've read in a long time! In a "galaxy" full of mediocre fanfics, this one stands out like a beacon. Looking forward to reading more of your work.