A great story. Very good.

I really enjoyed that! It was a great idea, and you pulled it off well!

wow this is one of the oldest stories I have ever reviewed. I just wanted to say that Beru and owen's character were very well written, and that's saying something because i don't really care for them much. This was a really good piece of work. BITD

Aw, what a beautiful piece once again, fyre :) By any chance, was it inspired by a certain scene in Children of the Jedi? It really reminded me of when Luke thinks about something similar in his past, so I was truly glad to finally find a story about that particular Force accident in his life :) Great characterizations, terrific action, and bittersweet secrets... What more can a girl ask for ;)

More of your stories, of course ;P

Keep up the great job!

Love
Mireille ='.'=

hehehe. yep! like father, like son!! a 'course luke could race! his dad did it at 9! ^

now i know why your so good your in the same luge as nuterl

Wow. This story just totally blew me away. All of the characters are so true to canon - not just in the facts but in their thinking and attitudes - that it is so easy to connect them with the Luke, Ben, etc. that we see in ANH.

I'm not sure what else to say, but I really did love this story. And I'm going to read some of your other stories.

I loved the way you portrayed little Luke. So innocent and clueless as to his "uncle's" attitude toward his abilities. I loved the validation he got from Obi-Wan. He would have been so much more self-assured if he could have had more of Obi's influence growing up. However it does give writers a chance to develope Luke angst over the years! Still writing Star Wars? Could you be convinced to , if you aren't right now? If so, please e-mail me and let me know. I loved this!

This was an extremely well written story, I really like the characterization on Luke and Ben. A thouroughly enjoyable story, my compliments.

That was a terrific story! Very well-written! I give it 5 stars!

Well, I told you so in the mail but a second time around can't hurt ;)
This one is definitly your best from all the Stat Wars stories you have written. I will read the Sentinel if I will finally find a decent homepage that explains the series to someone who has never had a chance to watch a single episode:(
BTW did you write any Pretender stories, next to the ones I already have *grin*

My the Force be with you (hey I know it is!!!) :)

Excellent work, you really held on to a six year olds perspective. It's harder to write for children than adults and you wrote, in addition to a realistic Luke, a convincing child. It's a little sad though, Luke seems mentally abused almost. You just want Ben Kenobi to punch Owen.

I give it a 10! This is *exactly* what I see Luke's childhood being like... I hope this author keeps writing!

Insightful, introspective...best characterization I've read in a long time! In a "galaxy" full of mediocre fanfics, this one stands out like a beacon. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

I liked it very much (10)