 KC Komicer 11/28/08 . chapter 1This is a really good excerpt that handled Ness and Jeff's character so delicately and so well. You have succeeded in humanizing both characters, making this short story a lovely read. |
 MellowMarshmallow 11/1/08 . chapter 1Another story I'm surprised I didn't review when I first read it ages ago.
This is another good story, a nice look into a chapter of EarthBound that really brings home how the characters must feel when they're trying to find a friend, preparing for the unknown. A good take written nicely. |
 Wasuremono 10/28/08 . chapter 1Much-belated fav for this, because... well, because it's an NYR for me and it rocks. (Meant to write you an EBR NYR, but time got away from me. I'll probably write it anyway and point you to it.) |
 Mizazu 6/11/08 . chapter 1This was so cute! It made my day. C: |
 ZeldaStrife 4/17/08 . chapter 1very nice! it made me smile. Ness and Jeff ftw! |
 Shamanic Shaymin 3/2/08 . chapter 1Aw, this is so cute! I like how casual this fic is. Also Jeff's dorkiness got nailed right down"Do I need to dig out scientific papers on what lack of sleep does to you, Ness?"), hee hee |