K, i kno this is old and I just starting 2 get in 2 it...but PHILLIP MANN?! I say that, cuz that's my father's name. I kno there r many in the world, but 2 me; THIS part is the "supernatural".

wow that was great, i couldnt stop reading until i got to the last written chapter! i wish you would update quickly!

YOU ARE KILLING ME
Cadence you silly BUTT.
Update NOW.

Wow, amazing, but a bit confusing. But amazing still. It's proabally confusing 'cause I'm half asleep, but that has nthin' to do with it!

Cool how you got Arnold just as obsessive, I love that part. The world needs more writers like you!

This is really interesting! Although I would suggest organizing your ideas a little bit better. I sense there is much you want to explain and describe, but you're not presenting it effectively and I find myself lost ever so often.

Please update soon! I cannot wait to see what happens!

*claps wildly* Excellent chapter! And it definitely fills in the blanks on a few things, especially bearing in mind a few of the different secrets revealed in the last few chapters. I hope someone finds Rhonda, though! *worries*

I LOVE THIS STORY!
I haven't been able to keep up lately because of school (BOO)
But its so amazing.
Its just beautiful and so different.
It reminds me of The Fountain (even though its nothing like it)
Like just an amazing story of love and universe.
Atleast thats my perspective.
And you manage to keep to the characters AND to your vision.
The characters don't loose their charm at all.
Most of them times when I'm reading stories I see people loose sight of the character they're writing about and just focus on the story more.
And what made us HA! fans fall in love with these people is gone.
But I don't see it in your story at all. Which I find amazing considering how different it is from most!
Omg I should stop ranting now. SORRY
Anyways keep up the amazing work!

Hi, Rhonda-drowner! Are you feeling okay? No pangs of conscience, or something? Yeah...? Well, I knew you would be okay.

Helga managed to teleport within a single chapter? She went into the closet and already touched the ground somewhere (hm... where?). Considering the fact that we are talking about your story I would say that you're rushing things. I wonder if San Lorenzo is in the same universe as Hillwood anyway.

It was weird, as usual. I guess I will have to re-read the story after it will be completed. I hope in a flow it will make more sense than when laid out in small portions.

Good job on the different POVs.

Keep the good writing.

I am still confused and intrigued...but I'm guess that's how it is supposed to be! I'm glad you finally updated! PS, I liked Helga's letter. Very well written and the descriptions of their trip, very good. Anyway, don't keep us waiting too long!

I finally got around to reading this chapter!

The sleeping sickness... I should have seen that coming... but I didn't! o_o Very well done!

Hm. I suppose things are kinda starting to make sense.
Or at least now I know that you aren't just making random stuff up as you go along. ;P

Update ASAP!

This is seriously whacked out, but I'm beyond intrigued.

I want Arnold to help Helga...to heck with his dad, he can do it! Arnold is like amazing he will help her and I can't wait to find out how...or sadly, if he does not...I can;t wait to find out what happens :) Good chappie :)

Oh crap. Now what are we going to do. *stares at her screen in dismay* Poor Helga! She's been slowly developing the sleeping sickness the entire time, and is going to try to pass it on to Brainy (great choice to place him in there, by the way. I love the Arnold-Helga-Brainy dynamic). Meanwhile Arnold is stuck fighting the wind; trying to stop something unstoppable.

But if the Corazon has a power, and Arnold isn't one of the rejected ones...can he do anything about it? Can he help?

Oh, you answered so many questions, and now I only have more! Great chapter--I enjoyed it more than I can describe. Now I'll be constantly thinking about what's going to happen next, though. "Is Brainy going to be okay? What about Helga? And is Arnold going to return to Helga's place, only to find her gone?" The suspense is killing me!