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Reviews For: oceans take you in

Puritey
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseWow... O.O Really good stuff. I love it.
Cipher Admin Eevee
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseAnd... this is the type of story which leaves me with completely nothing to say at all... because, really, it's just that close to perfect. :)
Interesting parallels, subtext and inclusion of a mix of canon and canon-based fanon. Beautiful internal rhyme scheme for the parts that do. I'm not sure of the exact reasons for the parentheses formatting, but they fit in with the story flow surprisingly well.
I did mention that this was wonderful, yes?
Please keep writing. :)
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