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NaomieKeiko
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
;3 I'm working on my plan to molest all your stories ^^
And I love to review older stories... It reminds the writer that your writing can be appreciated at any time (plus the older ones are better!)
alice456
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
nice
L'uke-chan
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
xD Aw! That's a good one. I have had already forgotten about the suggestion. Brilliant ending! Tho, there wasn't enough.. he he...action?.. ha ha ha.. But of course it Was their first date! KyA! Awesome!
melodyz07
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
Very cute^^

I liked the part with SetoxJou^^

Thank your for writing this very nice valentine oneshot.
Atemu Yugi Lover34
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
lol That made me smile. I had a crap valentines day but whatever. Great one-shot! :D
Innocent Slayer
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
So.. you based Yami off yourself

So your smex sessions with Yami are you loving yourself? :P

Anyways, it was good.. ^^; Thought very Anti V-Day

- Inno
dark flame dragon
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
so sweet and its yamis own fault for suggesting it
Misster Cackles
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Lol, cute, I liked that! One of my favorite YxYY one-shots (hardly ever look at them)
Nalurah
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
You know that scene when Yuugi was picking out clothes for Malik really reminded me of our little shopping trip. –evil grin- How much fun it is to spend other people’s money.
But if Yami is so much like you then why did I always miss the tidal wave on Valentine’s Day... I would have loved to see you drown. -smirks-
Now I want a moment of silence for a traumatized friend, mr trashcan... the amount of v-day cards because fatal.
-silence-... -snores-... –dreams and mumbles- sure, I would love to go shopping with your creditcard... no limit? I don’t mind!
-wakes up- Huh did I miss something?
Oh yeah note to self, must get stalkinglessons from Mariku... even though when he yelled ‘Malik-pretty’ he totally outgayed himself... yeah no comment on that one.
Hm.. I wonder how Joey and Seto got together... Give me more fluffy details on that one! I demand it! Okay... I did not need to know the alley details here! But you stole that from me, alleyorgies are mine!
And go Yuugi for hitting (on) Yami... yeah both work... -sweatdrops-
Anyway I shall now end my little review for I have ranted long enough.
Happy Valentinesday, pillow!
jin1377
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
*giggle* loved it...
FifthDayOfMay
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
...Sequal? This wasreally good, and I want to know more about Yami's revenge. No I don't mean anything dirty! >/< Just some stupidity between the two that will end in a hilarious outcome.
dragonlady222
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Very, very cute. I doubt that Yami's mind was changed about Valentines Day. I think, he is more interested in how he really likes Yuugi than what day it is. With the two of them the mush will continue all year.
tavia454
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
*snickers* Poor Yami, it turns out there really was something to like about SAD after all! Ugh, that particular day is tomorrow and I think I'm going to bury my head in the pillows and pretend it doesn't exist! How does that sound for a plan? Anyways, once again great story. Yugi's so cute when he's looking to Yami for signs of affection. Silly boy he should know by now. Later!
S2Teennovelist
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
SWEET! i couldn't wait to read this moony. Poor yami that must be annoying getting all that lovey-duby crap from people who only like him for his looks. Oh my god even bakura's under st. Valentine's spell!
I loved how you described poor yami's situation, i went throught he exact smae thing duirng my "love is for idiots" phase, though i didn;t have a ton of idiot admires, which i think was the problem.
i loved how cute yami was when he first entered the scen it reminded me of kumiko in HO, when she insulted Anzu without even trying! thst was priceless!
i loved it how yami and yugi are mnetally admiting they're in love with eachother but refuse to say it, and yeah you can't blame yami for not wanting cards from boys and girls who only like him for his looks; being bi must suck if your hot on valentine's day.
i loved how you incopertated malik and mariku's relationship, mariku's totally obsessed with him, and malik's enjoying every minute of it, but refuses to admit it. I can honestly say thought i like a pevertly insane mariku much bettere and a psycopathicly insane marikue that's the living defeinition of the world chaos and evil.
I loved how yugi was the one to break the ice instead of yami, i hope our favorite, sweet, spunky and pure-hearted hikari can convince yami there's more to this day than the commercial crap. That was so cool how yami almost threw yugi's card out, then snatched it back when he found yugi's name.
XD! Malik's freak out was hysterical and i love how calm yugi was during the whole thing. Malik's so in love he's just being too stubborn to admit it. It saddened me that yugi really thought yami wasn;t coming yetmso cute when he spent all that tim trying to be "perfect" for yami, if its yami, yugi's perfect just the way he is.
Oh my god that was so funny when he took his shirt off anf it was Yami, and yami;s comment made me burst out lauthing! Oh man i could just picture the look on yugi's face! (falls over laughting and painding the floor with her fist. Dark half looks at her wondering if she's having a fit?)
Oh my god, yami is such a tease, and poor yugi's enjoying every minute of it, that was so cute! I'm with yugi by the way if a boy wit yami;s eyes looked at me, i'd faint. It really sucks that all the really hot guys are either anime or manga characters, why are all the super hot and super cute bishounen ficitonal! it's not fair!!
I loved how you did their "date" its like a real date, about how two people who like eachother spend time together and just hang out and have some fun.
I loved how you added the joeyxseto while still keeping the two in character. too bad yami and seto's "competetive streak" had to got a nearly ruing the moment, glad they gotback to their sense though!, atlrats yamim did. I loved their date it was cute!
I loved their cute, and slifhtly fluffy confessions thought it wasn;t an exact "i love you" it was adorbale!!
HA! Oh my gosh, I knew malik and mariku were in love, I'm shcoked as hell Isis can just stand there and let them make love, but oh well it is a fanfic.
that was kinda ironic ending it with a slap for ignoring him, but that was so hsterical. I'm glad yami and yugi ad such a fun time, see yami-chan, valentine's day isn't so bad afterall. Too bad now you've made me curious about what yami' gonna do to get back at yug, and does it involve, lots of kisses, trasing and possibliy a late not when grandpa's not home? oh well that was adorable. Happy Valentine's day!
ZombieBlinky
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Interesting. I was just thinking "Hey, a lot of this reminds me of Leila!" E-GAD! Would you look at that? YOU wrote it! Heehee. Me oh my. Yugi certainly has the memory of an elephant.

Who smacks their significant other on Single Awareness Day? For real? I mean... "SMACK I LOVE YOU SMACK!" "SMACK! I SWEAR I SMACK LOVE YOU!"

Very nice. VERY nice. Very (insert creative word besides "Sexified" and "orgasmictical" -Or any variation of the word-)

Not to worry! Not to worry! I may not be smart, but I ain't dumb!
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