I like your spiderman 4 story. No scratch that, I luv it. Its a well thoughtful story, excellent combienation of characters in terms hw they were well told its movie worth. I can't wait 2read your nxt one

Spider Man 4 Is the most spectacular and Amazing story i have ever read and would have been a sucessful movie in the box office by Sam Raimi,the author has done a great job with this story and i am very happy to say in comparison that Spider Man 4 is much better then the disaster that was Spider Man 3 and it has one of the most long awated villians in the spideyverse:The Lizard and i give it 2 thumbs up keep up the good work!

SPIDER MAN 4 is a fantastic experiance that i have ever read and would have been an Amazing Movie as well, in comparison SPIDER-MAN 4 is much Better then the monstrosity that was SPIDER-MAN 3 keep up the good work and hope you make more.

First off, a very fun fanfic.

Second, a well-done cast give or take a few choices.

And finally, I congratulate thee on including Stan Lee and Bruce Campbell.

Oh, I figured out Bench and Dillon. Pretty clever cameos.

Also, am I the only one who can imagine Kingsley being played by Denis Leary?

Wow. A Spidey fic that's readable and has effort put into it. Tis a far cry from Eddie Kennedy's fics.

awsome story and very good choice for the most of the actors and actresses but a few questions who are Sebastian Stan,Sean Bean and Jeffery Tambor

One of the best writting I've you on the script Spiderman 4 wouldn't have been canselled.

Would have loved to have seen the Lizard in the next film instead of the reboot but you need an excellent job of using him here. The same can be said about Scorpion.

Looking forward to the next one to see where things go.

Good work.

Nice job! I love the way you eased us back into Peter's life in the first chapter, and I must say, the J/Gargan encounter was quite hilarious.

You do have a few spelling/grammar errors, and stuff like that. Nothing a little more proofreading can't fix. My only other criticism is that you could have made Connors' transformation a bit more realistic, and maybe dragged it out a little longer. Otherwise...

I'm really enjoying this!

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Wow...so great...beyond words...

You should consider sending this in to Marvel or Fox themselves. It is very film-worthy. Just on question-why have Josh Brolin as the scorpion? it just doen't seem to suit him.

Until enxt time, toodles!

this is a fantastic story! there were a few gramatical errors but they are easily forgiven for the high quality of the rest. cant wait to see what you have in store for spider-man 5, which im going to start reading once im done here. and what song was that at the end? and its good to see you went with the tradition of bruce cambell and stan lee, alot of authors would have over looked that lol.

Well after reading this I have to say it was very well done, especially action scenes though there are a few gramatical errors I think you did well in merging the cartoon plots into a movie and setting up the next villain.

Absolutely brilliant! I loved every minute of reading it! The way you wrote the scenes really worked! I hope you'll write a sequel cause now Im out of things to read XD

Eh he he... he proposed! Not the most romantic but at least it wasn't cheesy. Well this was a very nice wrap up. I personally could have handled more battering but that's your call. And SH*T! How many goblins do we need? Come on people, we need to get these sadistic badboys a hobby so they'll stop becoming super villians. Honestly... Well I much look forward to another story.
Ps: You should put some stuff about yourself on your profile. I'm sure your readers would like an insider view of the real you!