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| Aerrow4Eva 2008-09-09 ch 4,  | abuseyay you updated! nice chapter, you got the characters really right here. and i will take your word for it, please update the gateway and get back to Atmos! !~A4E~! |
| MissDedodakes 2008-09-07 ch 4, | abuseI haven't seen this story in ages! Oh, I missed Terra Flurria... YAYS! I got three new chapters to read! (because somehow, I missed when you updated them... hmm...) Please update again soon! I want to know what happens! :D |
| Unleash The Shadow 2008-09-07 ch 4, | abuseSweet! :D Awesome chapie! |
| Crimson Fox4 2008-09-07 ch 4, | abuseNice to get an update from you! Adn don't worry about the long update thing though... I've probably taken almost just as long with my one story... the new chapter should be up soon though! XD But again, it looks like to story is coming along well, so good job! :) Crimson Fox4 PS> You didn't need to give me credit for anything, I love spewing out random ideas! XD |
| Saerphe 2008-09-07 ch 4, | abuseYay, you updated! :D I'm hopin' to hear from Aerrow and Sakari next time. ;) |
| 3merald princ3ss 2008-09-07 ch 4, | abuseYou know i don't have a clue who came up with the term "plot bunny" Anyway great chapter I can't wait for the next! |
| KunoichiRena 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseI'm kind enough to review! >.> Update please! I WUFF JOU FOREVAH~! |
| I'vebecomesonumb 2008-05-31 ch 3, | abuseI have to wait 3 more weeks for school to be out*points to extremely large multicoloured circle on June 26th on calendar* I don't mind if it was short. That you updated is good. Actually, I have a couple of stories I should update soon... >> Anyways, it was a good chapter overall. A little more detail, which I like. anyways, UPDATE! |
| 3merald princ3ss 2008-05-31 ch 3, | abuseI don't mind if it was short. The furry white girl sounds very nice she reminds me of Lilly my OC anyway great chapter! School is nearly out and yay you can have more time to write! |
| Saerphe 2008-05-31 ch 3, | abuseYays! You updated! Can't wait for more! :) |
| Unleash The Shadow 2008-05-31 ch 3, | abuseA little short... but therre is Aerrow torture! With that I'm happy :D Update soon! |
| soldier4Christ 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseI totally forgot about this story. Wow, was I surprised to see this in my inbox. Cool. School was out last week here. Not that I really care. I'm not in school anymore. I don't know why, But when I was reading the speaking parts for for your little meddie I kept hearing here speaking with a British accent in kind of a soprano voice. Don't ask, I don't know. I think I'm gonna like her. I would've had the same reaction to all those medical terms that Aerrow did. Though with my sister-in-law now a registered nirse I'm gonna have to get used to it. |
| Tatertwig45 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseWow! I like!! I think the chapters are the right length! Not too long and not too short! Now, if you want to see very short chapters, look at my story Two Hearts Are Breaking Today! Update soon!! |
| Evie13 2008-04-05 ch 2, | abusePlease continue! It sounds like it could be an interesting story. The two chapters here are written very well. I look forward to reading more! |
| aerrow4eva 2008-04-01 ch 2, anon. | abusei really like this fic so far but yeh you need to make the chappies longer or if you cant just update sooner with lots of short ones!! keep up the good work |