ya could've made it more mooshy but i liked it, plus boshin should have played a part. either way it's in my favs.

Great thus far, but what should be done is before every Dialog and after the descriptions of whats happening, enter, to separate the parts for better location, it's easier to read. love it. _

pretty good. i always loved the thought of hotohori and miaka together more then taka.i bet the assassian was taka, right? eh, a guess..anyways, great story..wish it was longer though. do you think you will write any story about the new hotohori and miaka?

mhm... sequel? *nah...just joking*

so cool is it finish

I liked this a lot. Nicely done. _ A sequel would be much appreciated. .

awwwwwww...such a sweet ending...cuz i dont c much hotohorimiaka fics usually, altho i long for them! could use more spacing, but still wonderfully written!

I just LUUUUUUUVD the ending, it was so sweet and it just made me fell all fuzzy inside .

OI! Ijust read this story for about... the...5th timeI think. I just love it *wipes eyes*. I almost cried while reading it.

Anywayz, Gomen Nasai JupiterHalo. Sorry I haven't written you I letter. I was busy with my finals and school. But now they're over, so I'll write you a letter and send it as soon as I can, k? Can we still be friends?

Ja ne!

Hoto-kun and Miaka-chan forever What a nice story... Sequel... perhaps?

I LOVE IT! KAWAII! It's one of the best stories I've read beased on Hotohori and Miaka. You know what... I'm currently writing a HM fanfic too, but the problem is that it has a VERY similar ending. I was going to post it, demo I won't anymore since it will look like I took put of your story into mine. Any wayz... That was one great story. I like the part when Miaka saves Hotohori. o Sayonara!

ingenious story, very moving. I liked the ending with Seishuku hugging her and stuff, sort of like a new beginning. Very good work.

love it...love it...love it...

great...

I love your story a lot featuring my fave Miaka and Hotohori.