LOL. wow. But this is more of "lets just knock everything out of perspective and do whatever"
It would be nice to see a serious valentine :)

Everyone is extremely out of character. I'd work on that if I were you. It's nice that you can develop your own characters, but if you stray too far away from their true personalities, your readers will lose interest. The point of a fanfiction is to put the characters into a different plot, not distort them completely. Give it a go and see how it works out. I had the same problem as well a few years back.

Okay! Constructive criticism is... you should make it a little more your own. Like, don't -only- take pieces from the manga, and also it would be better if you wrote in more of a story format. You know, not with only or so much thoughts and speech, but also real action and description. And also... the paramore hoodie was a little... strange. She and Kei wear uniforms to school and so the hoodie kind of threw me. Make the story your own, just not TOO much that it goes away from the actual details of the story.

=] but besides that I'm really looking forward to the Kei and Hikari fluff.

So for now, Ja!

Haha funny! Update soon!

Come on! You have more than 2 reviews so where's chapiter 2? Seriously, i'll be waiting for more. I really love your fic (and i love S.A.), i hope you won't let your reviewers down (just putting a little bit of pressure on your shoulders). lol

I love it !~ :D thanx and please update more chapters soon xD (please write more~ -insert cute puppy dog eyes here- )

hiya!1 kawaii! its soo cute! i love s.a. and love this pairing! the little extra thingy was funny too! please continue this^-^ with more hikari and kei fluff...FLUFF MUAHAHAHAHA...sorry, i love kei and hikari fluff^-^

~Sakura-chan~

Hey, just wanted to tell you that I think you should totattly [I can't spell, lol, at least mpt a 6:40 in the morning] continue this story, Its a great begining [I never can spell that]. Plus S.A. is my favorite manga so I like reading stories about the characters.

Cute story! Btw, you got your icon from Elite right? I love it (its actually part of my signature for my email!)! I love special a fan fictions!