Wow! Nice story! It's almost like the beginning of a longer story! Hay... do you think that you can make this story a rewrite of 'Vader's Quest'? That would be awesome since there are hardly ANY good rewrites of that story!

Oh wow! Even though I read this story in the past, it remains as good now as it was then :) I just wish you had written much much more after it :) It is so short...

Great job anyway!!
I hope you're still writing nowadays!

Love
Mireille ='.'=

Wow that was really touching not to mention so sad as well though i enjoyed the beginning undertones presented that shows the struggle to come for Vader...

Bravo. All for that, you know. Great fic - you portray Vader in a near-human state of Sith, a machine with leaks of love.

I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS!

Greetings...I loved this fic. I love Vader/Luke fics. Of course, I've also noticed that you are a Potter fan...may I ask a favor of you? Will you read my Star Wars/Harry Potter Crossover entitled Dancer Girl? Anyway...great fic!! Positively loved it!!

well, vader must have been in shock that day. wonder how many soldiers he yelled at. ^

Awesome story. I wish we could seem some of these moments on screen. I love how you portray Vader trying not to think about Padme by name, but failing. And you've captured his mixed feelings about his son perfectly.

This was a great story. I thought that the last two words made the story a bit mysterious and very interesting.

Pretty good, but man what a place to end it.

A great story, and I love the last two lines, they just have an incredible impact!

Yeah, you know what i think of this story already, and i would have reviewed another except I. . .>cry

That was really awesome! Keep up the good work!

nice story.....sorry i can't be more constuctive with my criticism......a good piece of writing all in all.....

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