 Mai Ascot 12/31/11 . chapter 1Happy Dance! I love VaderLuke FatherSon fics! |
 Marriella Bullet 9/26/06 . chapter 1Wow! Nice story! It's almost like the beginning of a longer story! Hay... do you think that you can make this story a rewrite of 'Vader's Quest'? That would be awesome since there are hardly ANY good rewrites of that story! |
 Mireilles3 11/29/05 . chapter 1Oh wow! Even though I read this story in the past, it remains as good now as it was then :) I just wish you had written much much more after it :) It is so short...
Great job anyway!
I hope you're still writing nowadays!
Love
Mireille '.' |
 BetaReject 9/14/05 . chapter 1Wow that was really touching not to mention so sad as well though i enjoyed the beginning undertones presented that shows the struggle to come for Vader... |
 Huntress of the stars 7/10/05 . chapter 1Bravo. All for that, you know. Great fic - you portray Vader in a near-human state of Sith, a machine with leaks of love. |
 Shadowflame 4/12/05 . chapter 1 I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS! |
 Patricia de Lioncourt 1/11/05 . chapter 1Greetings...I loved this fic. I love Vader/Luke fics. Of course, I've also noticed that you are a Potter fan...may I ask a favor of you? Will you read my Star Wars/Harry Potter Crossover entitled Dancer Girl? Anyway...great fic! Positively loved it! |
 koriaena 8/26/04 . chapter 1well, vader must have been in shock that day. wonder how many soldiers he yelled at. |
 SR1918 8/2/03 . chapter 1Awesome story. I wish we could seem some of these moments on screen. I love how you portray Vader trying not to think about Padme by name, but failing. And you've captured his mixed feelings about his son perfectly. |
 TriGemini 7/26/03 . chapter 1This was a great story. I thought that the last two words made the story a bit mysterious and very interesting. |
 PhoenixMageFire 6/6/02 . chapter 1 Pretty good, but man what a place to end it. |
 Abby 6/4/01 . chapter 1 A great story, and I love the last two lines, they just have an incredible impact! |
 Homa 12/19/00 . chapter 1 Yeah, you know what i think of this story already, and i would have reviewed another except I. . .cry |
 Kally 8/2/00 . chapter 1 That was really awesome! Keep up the good work! |
 mya 6/28/00 . chapter 1nice story...sorry i can't be more constuctive with my criticism...a good piece of writing all in all... |