 Marriella Bullet 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Wow! Nice story! It's almost like the beginning of a longer story! Hay... do you think that you can make this story a rewrite of 'Vader's Quest'? That would be awesome since there are hardly ANY good rewrites of that story! |
 Mireilles3 2005-11-29 . chapter 1Oh wow! Even though I read this story in the past, it remains as good now as it was then :) I just wish you had written much much more after it :) It is so short...
Great job anyway!!
I hope you're still writing nowadays!
Love
Mireille ='.'= |
 BetaReject 2005-09-14 . chapter 1Wow that was really touching not to mention so sad as well though i enjoyed the beginning undertones presented that shows the struggle to come for Vader... |
 Huntress of the stars 2005-07-10 . chapter 1Bravo. All for that, you know. Great fic - you portray Vader in a near-human state of Sith, a machine with leaks of love. |
 Shadowflame 2005-04-12 . chapter 1 I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS! |
 Patricia de Lioncourt 2005-01-11 . chapter 1Greetings...I loved this fic. I love Vader/Luke fics. Of course, I've also noticed that you are a Potter fan...may I ask a favor of you? Will you read my Star Wars/Harry Potter Crossover entitled Dancer Girl? Anyway...great fic!! Positively loved it!! |
 koriaena 2004-08-26 . chapter 1well, vader must have been in shock that day. wonder how many soldiers he yelled at. ^ |
 SR1918 2003-08-02 . chapter 1Awesome story. I wish we could seem some of these moments on screen. I love how you portray Vader trying not to think about Padme by name, but failing. And you've captured his mixed feelings about his son perfectly. |
 TriGemini 2003-07-26 . chapter 1This was a great story. I thought that the last two words made the story a bit mysterious and very interesting. |
 PhoenixMageFire 2002-06-06 . chapter 1 Pretty good, but man what a place to end it. |
 Abby 2001-06-04 . chapter 1 A great story, and I love the last two lines, they just have an incredible impact! |
 Homa 2000-12-19 . chapter 1 Yeah, you know what i think of this story already, and i would have reviewed another except I. . .>cry |
 Kally 2000-08-02 . chapter 1 That was really awesome! Keep up the good work! |
 mya 2000-06-28 . chapter 1nice story.....sorry i can't be more constuctive with my criticism......a good piece of writing all in all..... |
 darthvader 2000-06-20 . chapter 1 Do not underestimate the dark side (100) |