 darthvader 6/20/00 . chapter 1 Do not underestimate the dark side (100) |
 Half-Elf 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Creepy, to say the least... |
 Werecat99 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very well written. I liked it. |
 Angela Jade 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Oooooo cool! Great characterisation. |
 Teresa Martin 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very nice. I liked your explanation of why Luke kept his name. |
 Valeria Von Doom aka Marvel Girl 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Wow. . .I love the title. The story is well written, I really like seeing the more human side to Darth Vader. The descriptions are wonderful too. . .I'm going to share it with all my friends who love Star Wars! |
 Tia'RaHu 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Could use a wee bit of beta-reading, but on the whole I quite liked it! |
 Ju 4/11/00 . chapter 1 good. very good. liked it! |
 FernWithy 4/11/00 . chapter 1 This is neat, fyre. A good interlude (no pun intended). I'm starting a PG- PG13 Vader-sympathetic home page (called Vader Chicks, but not actually limited to Chicks)... interested in an archive? |
 urnofknowledge 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very provocative. I was fascinated by the internal monologue, and the conflicts that played out in Vader's heart. Very good. There were some rough spots, but overall I enjoyed it. |
 Siti 4/11/00 . chapter 1 A really good insight. But when is the next part of Homecoming going to be done. E-mail me if you aren't going to finish it so I don't keep looking for it. |