Reviews for Life As We Knew It

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xXAngel404Xx 2008-08-17 ch 14,	abuseAw, poor Joe... =( Great chapter!
astalder27 2008-08-10 ch 14,	abuseAHH! I loved it!! I loved thier converstaion at the diner.. and Frank and Joe's talk in the car! Great job I cant wait for the trial!
MeadowLark4491 2008-08-07 ch 14,	abuseWow. That was...wow. Bravo on another good chapter. Tell your brother to get well soon.
ReneyC 2008-08-07 ch 14, anon.	abuseWow that chapter was very powerful, and it looks like Joe is on the road to start to recover. I knew Frank would not be far away. He could never leave Joe behind especially like this. I am looking forward to reading your next chapter.
Vinsmouse 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseSorry to hear your brother's been sick. Glad he's back home. Good chapter, like the way everybody is trying to get back to normal but still dealing with the shooting when needed. Looking forward to more, please update soon. Take care, Mouse
Jimmy Candlestick 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseaw...brotherly love... okay, i'm gonna be nit-picky...if that's the...phrase thingy... here's pretty much the only thing i was slightly annoyed with, i'm gonna give you the sentence, and then what it should've been. It was just him and Frank on the ride back, since Biff and Chet had gone with Tony and John and Carrie had left early to visit Dave. it looks like Biff and Chet had gone with Tony 'and' John 'and' Carrie. so, here's what you probably should've done. It was just him and Frank on the ride back, since Biff and Chet had gone with Tony, and John and Carrie had left early to visit Dave. see? the comma gives you a break, and helps clear up the fact that Biff, Chet, and Tony are not with John and Carrie. Also, the sentence at the end of that paragraph left me baffled, i couldn't figure out what it said. other than those things, it was a good chapter over all.
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseWow, this story is utterly amazing. I completely love your writing style. The scene with Frank and Joe was so, so, so good. Great chapter, update soon!
Miss Fenway 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseWell, first of all I'm glad your brother is getting better ad I'll be praying for him. I love this story. And I really loved this chapter. The emotions were perfect, the characters flawless. You rock at writing. :) Update soon!
whitetigers 2008-08-06 ch 14,	abuseOh that was such an awesome chapter! Very heartbreaking and so true. You're taking the boys through this at a very normal pace instead of rushing into thier recover from this. Beautifully written!
SchoolBoredom 2008-07-07 ch 13,	abusewow that was soo cool! keep up the great work! cya!
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-04 ch 13,	abuseFantastic chapter! I can't wait to see what happens, update soon, please!
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-04 ch 12,	abuseToday was no different. The run took them another fifteen minutes even though they were only two miles away. No way was Frank going to let Joe collapse of him again. They slowed as they reached the graves and memorial. Frank always thought of how close Joe had been to becoming a name on that memorial. Looking at his brother, Frank saw him shiver. Not for the first time, Frank wondered what Joe thought when he looked at this. How do you remember an even you’ve forgotten? I loved that passage it was very powerful. Great chapter!
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-04 ch 11,	abusePoor John, I feel so bad for him losing his brother.
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abuseI had captured his king for the third time in a row and was in the process of setting up another game when he started talking. “Are you okay, Frank?” Though the question took me by surprise, I tried not to show it. Rooks in the corners, then Knights. I used to love naming the pieces. “Of course I’m okay, Joe. It’s you everyone’s worried about.” I looked up at him then, in time to catch the face he was making. I knew he hated being treated like a child, but he had almost died. He had died. Joe looked at my setup before switching his King and Queen. He never could get their order right. “I don’t think it’s me they should be worrying about.” I loved how he was setting up the pieces even as Joe was talking about the shooting. Great chapter.
An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-04 ch 9,	abuseThis is such a sad story, it's very well written and I absolutely love it.

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