Kai pregnant?
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Nice. These are all pretty cool, by the way. Keep it up! ;]

Waah, it's so unexpected! Wonder how Kai is feeling after hearing something like that? These chapters are getting progressively weirder. . .I hope you'll have some more serious ones too! Keep up the good work, these short stories are holding their own quite nicely!

I'm so surprised! Mr. D and Tyson? Wonder what the age gap between them would be?

This chapter was quite well-written, and I think it seemed significantly more fluent than chapter one. Only problem I noticed was in the second to last paragraph - I think you should use 'come' instead of 'came.'

A bit of an awkward pairing, ne? Err. . .I think it might be best to stick within the range of the teenage beybladers ^_^

Oh my! A pretty intensive first chapter. I'll admit, I got kinda hungry when you mentioned chili cheese fries ^_^

Say, who's POV is this in? I was thinking it was probably Tyson's. . .am I right? Though now that I think about it, Max or Kenny may be feasible too, err, minus the fact that said person wishes to kill Kai x_x

So you're going to have 104 of these? That's quite an endeavor, so I wish you good luck!

Aren't one shots supposed to be final?! cuz if you're planning for mystery, you need some serious work. >

Man what a way to um well expess yourself and it sounded so real like you really experienced it wow