funny i liked the part when axel said “You know...Does Roxas play for the other team?” and then when sora said "are you kidding me?!of course he is!!". it was my fav part though i would've liked it more if sora diched kiri and went to riku...i kind of hate kiri(i used to lobe sora that's why

AW!! THAT WAS SUPER CUTE! xD I usually go for smut, but this fluff made me squeal

Kirah: ... I think I'm going to be sick from the OOC fluff. *Shrug* But it's all good! Fluff is fluff is fluff, regardless of anything else!
Ruth: ...I feel, like, pathetically single right now.
Kirah: I wish I was NOT pathetically single.
Ruth: Yes, I know. You've been implying it, like, ALL DAY.
Kirah: Honestly, for someone so smart she's completely oblivious. How blatantly in love can I get? I feel like a blushing schoolgirl.
Ruth: Uh, Kirah-
Kirah: NOT. A. WORD.

wow,thats so sweet

truthfully,i hate V-day my friend and i dressed up in black and forever dubbed V-day Doom's day.so i only think its sweet because (1)its a good story and (2)its with my favorite pairing

good job! :)