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| nim istar 2008-05-30 ch 4,  | abusenice story, hope to see more. |
| aznblackhowling 2008-04-25 ch 4, | abuseThis is a very good Mortal Kombat crossover. I hope to see this updated soon again. |
| avatoa 2008-04-07 ch 4, | abuseThis story is monstrously kickass. Keep up the good work dude cause I wish to see what happens when Naruto returns to Konoha. |
| killroy777 2008-03-20 ch 4, | abuseupdates plox? |
| heartflame 2008-03-05 ch 4, | abuseThis is great, I hope you update soon. |
| Blackfang1983 2008-02-25 ch 4, | abusesounds awesome |
| Kammari 2008-02-19 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter i hope you update this story soon. |
| demoncreater2002 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abusegood story iaht wait for the next chapter ^_^ |
| badboywest 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseinteresting |
| scione 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abusei like Kasumi her and naruto would be good together i like ayane more tho but o well keep up the super job. |
| chm01 2008-02-14 ch 4, | abusewhat happened to the tournament for kasumi's hand? |
| cybermage 2008-02-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseCan you explain later how naruto arrived in the outer world? Hope you add more interaction between naruto and kasumi. Will ayane make an appearance. I think you should slow down the story, i think it is going too fast. Also pay attention to detail. I think you should show what skills/ techniques, naruto has. |
| ofdarknesschaos 2008-02-13 ch 4, | abuseNEXT CHAPTER PLEASE^_^ |
| spedclass 2008-02-13 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
| spedclass 2008-02-13 ch 3, | abuseAwesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |