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KeiNatsu 2008-06-08 ch 1,	abusesquirms Whe... sighs contently The last sentence, though, was it quoted from "Simple and Clean" song? hehe... Anyway, so... nice. Things were really that simple.
Angel of Lavender 2008-04-16 ch 1,	abuseAh Sora..thats so smooth! major points right there :D that was an adorable story ^^
Peachie Bunni 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful and sweet. Those are the words that I choose to describe this story. It was cute, almost unbearably so :) But in a definite good way, yes, quite good. I enjoyed reading this, enjoyed it a LOT in fact :D
EternalSketches 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, this seems late for V-day, then again I havemt been checking my E0mail^^;, but this is pretty good. Im seriosuly blwn away by your perseverence-youve written like a million stories, and you just keep going in an effort to becom better. Ive noticed it too! This is well written, and an exceptional story for V-dayn_n but out of all the great things in this, there are a few things that I hope you can change in your writting(this is meant to be constructive!! so dont hate me^^;). I know riku is sexy, and awesome, and the epitome of all things godly-but when you leave out all sora's greatest qualityies, then it just seems shallow and one sided. This was great for a one shot-but for your many AU's, try to make sora a bit more confident, and bit less weak and, hopefully not, pathetic, as Ive seen countless-_- times. It seriously kills me, cuz i dont think that someone who save the universe could ever be as weak and over girly as many make him out to be..but if you can dish out good fics like this, maybe it wont be so bad-I just wanted to give you some feedback my friend^^ anyways-great job-I hope you had a jubilant valentines day~
mochiusagi 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseaw that was so cute!
Miss Alyssa 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseglomp Thank you! That was such a nice present... ^^ The end was so cute... and the devious little girls... >/< Aww... coo-ing over the Soriku cuteness Thanks again! ~Miss Alyssa~
Scootkadoot 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseAGH. SO CUTE. a;lsdkmfa;sldkfj That made me so happy. XD
Cassie-san 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww... this was so cute! I luffs it. =] You did a wonderful job, hun. Keep it up. ;)
Overpowered 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw! C;>
Shironess 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseAW. xD First Teen rated fic I've read in years. But it was so adorable anyways. Since there isn't going to be a continuation, my review is going to be a bit shorter since I'm not trying to give advice for writing more. Anyways, I'm a huge fan of your work. x3 I can't wait to read more chapters and stories by you. Happy Valentines Day
InUrNitemares214 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseThat's so sweet! ^.^ It's perfect for Valentine's Day!
Artificial Starlight 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseAW~! That was so CUTE! I loved it! Adorable, and you made it so realistic sounding, I love you're writing, awesome job! ^-^ Favorites!
Becca86 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sweet! :3 And the ending... The ending! X3 I loved your oneshot a lot, just like your other ones. Oh and yay for pointless reviews! XD (sorry, I wanted to leave one but didn't know what to say.)
Midnight Crisis 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseThis was awesome! And a Happy V-Day to you!
Hiki-chan 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseI really, really, really love your oneshots! Especially since they're all RikuSora, I don't have anything against AkuRoku since I like it too, but I feel there aren't enough RikuSora stories. XD Anyway, amazing oneshot! I could really see Kairi and Namine doing what they did. XD

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