first ss and gg fic i fav!
it's kinda bittersweet, but really nice. love it:)

Quite excellent. I like the alternating bits. Bittersweet at the end.

i've never seen anything quite like this in terms of format. it's good, though slightly confusing first time round. but after a couple read-throughs, it makes sense and it's even more powerful. i love it.

--kyra

Awsome :)

Wow. This is amazing. It's well written and original. Very cute, too! But I'm slightly confused. No wait. Never mind.