Oh my goodness! You really have a way of making me, the person who killed off Rukia, cry! That was so sad!
Alright, you said you wanted constructive critisism...I don't even think I spelt that right..lol. Okay--so, usually I wouldn't reccomend using your own characters, not that it bothers me! I love OCs! Some people are cruel though and I don't want you to be flamed or anything..I swear some people are just here to bash other people. lol. But, by all means, I like this a lot! Pheonix is really cool! She's very realistic, which is hard to come by in a story..I have a HUGE troube with making my -one- OC realistic and not Marysue-ish. So, great job with that!

This was such a good oneshot. You're very descriptive, and you seem to get down the real meaning of the song. That's hard to do as well.=]
Keep writing! If you have anything else you would like me to read, just PM me!
Great job on this! I can't wait to hear from you again!

nice job.

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it wasn't that good? that was awesome. i know this sounds weird but i absolutely adore AU stories and oneshots. nice job.

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wow i thought that was really good. most ppl dont like stuff like this, but i do. i think this is great.

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OMG thank u i LOVE this