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| Faery 2002-08-12 ch 10, anon. | abuseGreat story! I was kind of hoping it would be a Sara/Gabe story, but I still liked it. You sort of ended it on a cliff hanger though. Will there be a sequel? |
| CrazyAce 2002-07-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseany story with gabe & ian is cool. but yours was great. i luv how gabe was so strong and how ian isnt truly evil at heart. to paraphrase tony the tiger, iiiiitttt'sss GREAT! |
| Night Seraph 2002-07-21 ch 10, anon. | abuseYou put an awesome story together, especially since Gabe stories are rare. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your stuph. |
2001-11-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseVERY GOOD! I like it a lot and I want more.. so please tell me taht this isn't over with the epilogue... as a writer myself I firmly believe that some stories need sequels and this os one od them... SO KEEP GOING!!!! Thank you for sharing this with us... |
| wildxtreme 2001-10-28 ch 10, anon. | abuseHey, Really Great Fic!!! It's the best I've read so far. If I may ask, what are you studying in college??? (If you are in college.) Maybe theology or in the seminary. Great form of writing. I liked all the phrases and sayings. Very good use of the literay sense. Anyway. What was the meaning of that last paragraph. Kinda sounded like a cliff hanger to me. Seems like we need some more chapters. I didn't expect it to end that way. Great fic though. Really was. Not a lot of Gabe fics out there. Keep up the great writing. Loved it. Email me sometime. Have lots of questions. |
| Kalder-maaren 2001-10-28 ch 10, anon. | abuseA truly remarkable work of short fiction. Concise, but tight, well written, and gripping. Thank you. |
| jean 2001-10-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis is a very moving story. To me it seems that you have voices of Ian, Gabriel and Sara nearly perfect. ( The song "Cry little sister" started playing in my head in the last 3 chapters.) |
| roguegal17 2001-10-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis was truly a job well done. The last line is just perfect. I wish I could better explain how much I have enjoyed the story and the way you captured each character in the right light. I can't wait to read your next fic, as well as the revisions you've planned. Thank you for sharing. |
| rssp5 2001-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow - what a great story. It definitely kept me interested. I couldn't wait to get started with each chapter. I loved how you delved into the relationship between Sara and Gabriel. In most stories I don't care for "invented" characters (i.e. Phillis) but you made it work. I hope you continue with a story about Sara and Ian. I think you would do a great job! |
| Divamercury (too lazy to lo... 2001-10-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis rocks! Yay, you finished! I loved reading this, and I'm looking forward to the upgrades of it. Great job! |
| Anna 2001-10-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseOoohhhh, that was sooo good, thank you. Please bring an epilogue soon. And maybe a sequel even???? Please??? Great job...and Meghan, I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did |
| Divamercury (too dern lazy ... 2001-10-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseIt was worth the wait. And eventually better be soon, or else! |
| PEZ 2001-10-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseThat was wonderful!! Can't wait for the epilogue:) |
| HalfTime1030 2001-10-10 ch 9,  | abuseYea!!! Great story-- thanks for sharing it with us! |
| Beck 2001-10-09 ch 9, anon. | abuse"Sara wanted to answer, but she had no idea. "A dragon," she finally answered. "In a world full of people who don't believe in them."" What a great line! I love it...can't wait to read the epilogue! |