LOL that was hilarious.)

Very amusing. I'd be interested to see more... but I hope she picks Xellos.

Uh...no. o_O Zel would freak out if Lina was going out on a date with Xelloss. Everyone would. Simply put, Xelloss is...well, Xelloss. Not only that, but everyone is a bit out of character. Zel for reasons I mentioned above (and because of the fact that he is NOT that forward, Amelia because she'd be interested in Lina's SAFETY, and Gourry because he's not that retarded.

*Falls over laughing* Enough said... *continues laughing on her way out*

Aww.. that was so cute!

wai wai! that was awesome! it was very cute and you did the characters perfect! keep writing!

Pretty good. It was a fun read But it was kinda OOC
Zero hour..LOL