Amazing...and then it just ends. Sadness.

Very well written and I think the concept of Kim and Shego each having developed inner-voices as ways of coping was a neat touch.

No! Not a slower update...you must update ASAP...as in...NOW!

Hehe...please?

FYI you never really did do the sequel... it was a good story.. you should have continued it

I absolutely love this rewrite, although i would like to know what happens after 'four years later'

this chpter was good an a bit unsettling

If I didn't already hate Drakken in Four Years Later, I'd loathe him here. I still do, but that was a great way for Kim to get to Shego.

i really like what you're doing with this alternate to "four years later," it has a great plot. when are you going to pick up on your "four years" sequel? i'm anxious to find out what happens next. love your fics, great job.

there must be more please

A good alternate ending. It opens a great deal of material that went untouched with the original (but still good) ending. You hit the right balance of plot and mystery for an "opening" chapter. I, for one, can't wait for more.

To be honest, I vaguely remembered the storyline to this, but I was so excited that I decided to just read the chapter anyways.

I should have reread it. ^^;

But grammatically and spelling-wise, it looked fine. The only thing I noticed was that you left off an 'M' on Kimmie towards the end where it says:

"Hey, dont' be stupid, Kimmie -"

But I don't know if that's just how I spell Kimmie or not, so technically I'd say that isn't really a spelling error. Anyways, I think I'll have to go back and reread in order to remember the smaller details of the story.

Nice rewrite I enjoyed Four Years later and was waiting for something to follow it and I think this is a great rewrite.