right then and there she should have just gone to smith. although i have mild respect for John Rolfe, i still cannot possibly believe it.

Oh, Lord, I hated John Smith in this movie. I understand first love and all, but really, John Rolfe is so much better.

Loved it! (faves)

That was great,I read the other story here while back. I hope you do more stories based on The New World. And I hope you do some on the disney version as well. I love reading new stories about Pocahontas. I look forward to more stories from you.

Ow, that one just totally hurt my heart! Lol! Great job yet again, my friend! You captured the essence (can't spell that word) of that difficult situation beautifully! I loved it!

To lazy to sign in, wow another wonderful work with such depth. I was remimded of so much emotion that I had forgot from the movie and so much more that can help my own work thanks to you. Again great job and I can't for the next one. Brava!