Dark... but I liked it. Though you have to wonder what was capable of getting Xellos. Write more!

:D I loved it _!

i LOVE IT! Keep writing more! I don't paticulary like Lina/ Xellos I must rather prefer Xellos/Filia... But like the genious that this story shows you obviously are, you didn't put who it was about in the summary so i clicked on it to find out...Well...you can see what happened next.. your first SENTENCE caught me. Ya know...like a fish on a hook...heheheh well, keep it up with the excellent writings... sorry to ramble so much! LOVE EVERYBODYS! See ya's all later

i like this, actually i think i've read it before but i don't remember

short but sweet!