*Aruruu's voice* "Ane-san married Daddy, and now Ane-san's gonna have Daddys baby!"

Ahhh, the innocence of youth. Isn't it weird how kids can say things like that, and it's classified as "cute", not "creepy"?

the story was so good i didn't even notice the bad punctuation untill you pointed it out.

Wow... simply wow... I just finished playing the game and I'm still hooked... wow

beautiful!

Beautiful. When Hakuro left I cried for days

Hado, the story was fine save for some of the spelling. I love Hakuro and Eruru together!