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counter-intuitive
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
Ahh... I'm like you, I can't imagine SasuSaku happening at all... Sasuke never loved Sakura back.
cluelessninja65
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
this was fantastic! i really liked how it all played out, with sakura finally realizing and sasuke at least realizing her feelings were real and feeling guilty. and of course i love the sasunarusasu ness in it! great oneshot!!
Angel
2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Shivers, what's there to flame? I read it in trepidation because I can't read het too bwah and I definitely don't do Sasuke with anyone but Naruto heck only for each other.

The thought of Sasuke with Sak arrggh! But I read the yaoi implied warning and proceeded to click - gee so good I love it! Of course he means Naruto doh! I would love to be a fly on the wall to what proceeded these events though...care to write a prequel? What did Sasuke do to drive the Dobe away? He he though I'm afraid of the angst to find there sniff!

And after the prequel we get the sequel too right? :P
Kuro-Kasai-Tenshi
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I agree with you, I just don't see chemistry between Sasuke and Sakura, a friend of mine who writes fanfiction a little bit keeps trying to get me to read all these SasuSaku stories, in an attempt to get me attached to it, the thing is though, a diff. friend got me hooked on yaoi first, but it was a still a good story an d i liked it!
Earthsoftenstheflame
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
I'm not a fan of SasuSaku but great work! I am a SasuNaru fan though, so can I assume that Sasuke is going to Takigakure to go find Naruto or something? :D Keep up the great work!
Clemen
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
Great work. Poor Sakura and poor Sasuke. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care and god bless.
Asian Tinkerbell
2008-04-25 . chapter 1
Your stories are pretty good. This one is not even SasuSaku. It's so one-sided that's its not even funny. I HATE SasuSaku...but I could take this one because it's not really SasuSaku.
Kzdatgurl
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
I think is was great attempt at het-sex! although it was more of molestation...lol...i totally dont understand Sasusaku myself. i can see Sasuhina befor Sasusaku! haha...

this is definitly going on my favs list!
Black-Rose23
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
I perceive him as Naruto. Don't worry, I understand the difficulty in seeing any chemistry between Sakura and Sasuke while having friends who demand I give the pairing a chance - until they realize that I just can't stomach it without Sasuke leaving for someone else - preferably Naruto. Now, onto the review!

Like I said, I can barely tolerate any form of SasuSaku without knowing Sasuke is going for someone else. And usually, if there's any form of intimate contact, such as there was in this fic, between the two, I leave before I finish reading. However, this time I just had to read it! You kept me captivated the whole story. I wonder how Naruto reacted when/if Sasuke found him in Takigakure.
Unhappy maiden
2008-02-18 . chapter 1
...ahh..so that's why...
...i even thought this one contains a sasuxsaku love pairing..

..heck, this one is NICE!...

uh..I'm mean GOOD!


Oh not good!...

OH, SO GOOD!...XD


I'm hoping u'll continue writing on this site...see ya!
neebu
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
ohmygoshohmygoshOHMYFRIGGINGOSH!
amazing. I LOVED IT!
The lemon(sex) was AMAZING!
I loved it. You described it in detail and...just...I'm at a loss for words. That's how great it was!
I just wished that Sasuke was into it a little more. He seemed kinda like a robot. But that's just my view. But other than that it was total awesomeness. Seriously. The grammar was great, detail, everything.
I'm so glad I read this! lol.
I can't wait for another chappie!
please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
...I'll be looking forward to it.
: )
xXsakuraloverXx
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
hm...good...good...hm...
Baby Acoustic
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
sasusaku wow!
the part i didnt enjoy was 'he dosent love u anymore'
no offense, i used to like sasunaru but then i meet this girl who didnt stop talking about it so yea... now i like sasusaku and alittle sasunaru but no much, great start though
ObsessiveCompulsive5699
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
Hmm...Well, I can't say I like this couple, but I did like this story. This is the only way I can imagine them together too...Good job!

obsessive
DarkAngelRakell
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
oh god who was the person you should make a sequel!
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