I LUV APPA!

This was very good. It took me a minute to realize he was talking to Appa. I went through the entire human cast first before I realized it, even Haru. It was a real 'duh' moment when Appa finally hit me. And Appa was the first to want Zuko to stay.

One question though, what is with the '/i' all over the story? It appears several times. Were you trying to put in some foreign character or something? Other than that this was a great story. Write more.

Appa? :) Wasn't expecting that, but a great twist, and I like the story, too. Great for your first fic, only problem is with the "i you/i want", which appeared twice or so, but that's easily fixable and not nearly as bad as my mistakes...*cough* with names *cough* and which story I'm writing *cough cough* XD Anyway, great job!

-Aviation

Ha! Appa!! That is so great! Love this story.

very good story, and great start to writing. you just might want to check the grammar and the i you/i want..., just remove the i's and the /, but good story. Thought it was Toph at first, but then knew who it was after you mentioned her.

*giggles* At first I thought "Wait, Zuko talks to himself! *evil smirk" and then as I finished this you mentioned it was Appa. Brava! Really nice short fic you have here, I enjoyed it lots! Loved how you had it from Aang's point of view. Poor crazy Zuko...*gigglefit*
Write more soon!
~December'sRose