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| linwe 2008-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhen I got your message I went back to look at your other stories and realized I'd already read this one! It's not unusual that I didn't review though, I'm one of those with a slippery mind... But this one stuck out in my memory 'cause as soon as I saw the title I was like, "OH YEAH! The cute one!" So, now you know, this one also made a lasting impression on me. :D Off to read World of Dreams (no way was I going to try to wring my brain in an attempt to write that backwards)! |
| HappyDragon411 2008-07-11 ch 4, | abuse::purrs:: A fine work of art that goes against the normal grain. I think I died many a time from a 'cuteness-overload'. ::Tags Kagome:: ~ Lynn Stardragon, The Happy Dragon |
| Evil Jenyus 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseok so i love this story and i just had to tell you this: when i read the bit about paramore i totally FLIPPED! I FREAKING LOVE PARAMORE! one of my best friends got me hooked on it a couple months ago and now i'm addicted! we're even talking like i'm gonna sing it for my boyfriends band :P sorry, i get excited easily. i love the bit about Sora (because we all know it's sora)'s oral fixation...somehow i have a feeling that is going to turn sexual...soon...hopefully :P dirty, dirty mind...ah like i give a damn. ok gonna stop rambling and finish reading this AMAZING story...hope i made you laugh XD sincerely random, the Evil Jenyus |
| Chronos Mephistopheles 2008-05-28 ch 4, | abuseThis story is just adorable. You should be very proud of yourself for writing this! I |
| Peppermint Ink 2008-05-16 ch 4, | abuseWow, I just got choked up, Thats the end. I loved it. It was really well-written and I didn't stop reading until I reached the end. My only dislike in the whole fic would be at the start, when Riku has a whole monologue going, that was a bit boring. Other than that, it was awesome and inspiring. I hope I can someday be able to create such beautiful story-lines as you have. Would you consider writing a longer epilogue? |
| THE DEVLIN 2008-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a well written chapter, and I love the reference to The Importance of Being Earnest. |
| Kishiro Kitsune 2008-05-06 ch 4, | abuseI loved this! Totally cute and worth putting in my favorites to read again (and again and again). I'm a sucker for cute fanfictions like this. I even got inspired from a part of Sora's letter in the last chapter and had to do a quick doodle of the comic part. For some reason when I read that I got a wonderful mental image of Roxas and Axel. If I ever get a scanner or find one I can use I'll post it on DeviantArt and let you know, if you'd like to see it. It's really messy and I can't draw Roxas's hair very well. I did remember to write myself a note at the top saying where it came from. |
| Imeralt Evalon 2008-03-18 ch 4, | abuseAw. This story was just too cute not to review and fav. I thought I would have had a heartattack if you tricked me and it wasn't Sora, as some kind of cruel plot-switcharoo...which i've been known to do from time to time. xD But I really enjoyed reading your story and couldn't help but favorite it. :D |
| Eternamente 2008-03-13 ch 4, | abuseAhh quick note as I have to run to work XD but you made my day with this... sad I didn't get to read it as soon as I got the alert, but I'm glad I found some time to squeeze it in :D Beautifully written... I was terrified that Sora would wind up NOT being the secret admirer lmao... crazy twist, eh? But I'm glad he was :) Much love... always love your writing :D |
| Eternamente 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseThis story makes me grin like a fool. It's refreshing to read a story where Riku is fangirl-crushing on Sora, and not being the suave sophisticated type he's so often made out to be. It's good to see him sweat it out once in a while ;) I'll be reading the rest of this as I have the time... you have me putting off getting ready for work to read this XD |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-03-12 ch 4, | abuse*sniff* That was very sweet. I'd have liked to have reviewed this regularly, but life... sucks. First off, I'd like to say: Sora's taste in music is amazing. I'm a rabid fan of the first four bands on his list! I love how you always weave in things such as music and video games (or lack thereof) into the characters- things that help to characterize people right now, in these times. They make the characters seem so much more real. Sora's letters also did such a good job of fleshing him out... The ending made me grin like an idiot, and this whole thing had me blushing happily all the way through. I love it! ~IGC t DM |
| sana-chan9 2008-02-29 ch 4, | abuseWOW THE STICKERS WERE SO FUNNY!1 |
| sana-chan9 2008-02-29 ch 3, | abuseOMG THE STICKERS WERE SO FUNNY! |
| DramaQueen1193 2008-02-27 ch 4, | abuseSo cute! -fangirl squeal- |
| Corey-Chan 2008-02-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseI absolutly adored your story! It really made my night, thank you so much! Also, because of this story I looked up the band Eisley and it is a really great band, thanks for that as well! :D |