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linwe
2008-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhen I got your message I went back to look at your other stories and realized I'd already read this one! It's not unusual that I didn't review though, I'm one of those with a slippery mind... But this one stuck out in my memory 'cause as soon as I saw the title I was like, "OH YEAH! The cute one!" So, now you know, this one also made a lasting impression on me. :D

Off to read World of Dreams (no way was I going to try to wring my brain in an attempt to write that backwards)!
HappyDragon411
2008-07-11
ch 4,
abuse::purrs:: A fine work of art that goes against the normal grain. I think I died many a time from a 'cuteness-overload'.


::Tags Kagome::


~ Lynn Stardragon, The Happy Dragon
Evil Jenyus
2008-06-21
ch 3,
abuseok so i love this story and i just had to tell you this: when i read the bit about paramore i totally FLIPPED! I FREAKING LOVE PARAMORE! one of my best friends got me hooked on it a couple months ago and now i'm addicted! we're even talking like i'm gonna sing it for my boyfriends band :P sorry, i get excited easily. i love the bit about Sora (because we all know it's sora)'s oral fixation...somehow i have a feeling that is going to turn sexual...soon...hopefully :P dirty, dirty mind...ah like i give a damn. ok gonna stop rambling and finish reading this AMAZING story...hope i made you laugh XD
sincerely random,
the Evil Jenyus
Chronos Mephistopheles
2008-05-28
ch 4,
abuseThis story is just adorable. You should be very proud of yourself for writing this! I
Peppermint Ink
2008-05-16
ch 4,
abuseWow, I just got choked up, Thats the end. I loved it. It was really well-written and I didn't stop reading until I reached the end. My only dislike in the whole fic would be at the start, when Riku has a whole monologue going, that was a bit boring. Other than that, it was awesome and inspiring. I hope I can someday be able to create such beautiful story-lines as you have. Would you consider writing a longer epilogue?
THE DEVLIN
2008-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was a well written chapter, and I love the reference to The Importance of Being Earnest.
Kishiro Kitsune
2008-05-06
ch 4,
abuseI loved this! Totally cute and worth putting in my favorites to read again (and again and again). I'm a sucker for cute fanfictions like this. I even got inspired from a part of Sora's letter in the last chapter and had to do a quick doodle of the comic part. For some reason when I read that I got a wonderful mental image of Roxas and Axel. If I ever get a scanner or find one I can use I'll post it on DeviantArt and let you know, if you'd like to see it. It's really messy and I can't draw Roxas's hair very well. I did remember to write myself a note at the top saying where it came from.
Imeralt Evalon
2008-03-18
ch 4,
abuseAw. This story was just too cute not to review and fav. I thought I would have had a heartattack if you tricked me and it wasn't Sora, as some kind of cruel plot-switcharoo...which i've been known to do from time to time. xD

But I really enjoyed reading your story and couldn't help but favorite it. :D
Eternamente
2008-03-13
ch 4,
abuseAhh quick note as I have to run to work XD but you made my day with this... sad I didn't get to read it as soon as I got the alert, but I'm glad I found some time to squeeze it in :D Beautifully written... I was terrified that Sora would wind up NOT being the secret admirer lmao... crazy twist, eh? But I'm glad he was :) Much love... always love your writing :D
Eternamente
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseThis story makes me grin like a fool. It's refreshing to read a story where Riku is fangirl-crushing on Sora, and not being the suave sophisticated type he's so often made out to be. It's good to see him sweat it out once in a while ;) I'll be reading the rest of this as I have the time... you have me putting off getting ready for work to read this XD
Skoteinos Metamfiezomai
2008-03-12
ch 4,
abuse*sniff* That was very sweet. I'd have liked to have reviewed this regularly, but life... sucks.

First off, I'd like to say: Sora's taste in music is amazing. I'm a rabid fan of the first four bands on his list! I love how you always weave in things such as music and video games (or lack thereof) into the characters- things that help to characterize people right now, in these times. They make the characters seem so much more real.

Sora's letters also did such a good job of fleshing him out... The ending made me grin like an idiot, and this whole thing had me blushing happily all the way through. I love it!

~IGC t DM
sana-chan9
2008-02-29
ch 4,
abuseWOW THE STICKERS WERE SO FUNNY!1


sana-chan9
2008-02-29
ch 3,
abuseOMG THE STICKERS WERE SO FUNNY!

DramaQueen1193
2008-02-27
ch 4,
abuseSo cute! -fangirl squeal-
Corey-Chan
2008-02-25
ch 4, anon.
abuseI absolutly adored your story! It really made my night, thank you so much! Also, because of this story I looked up the band Eisley and it is a really great band, thanks for that as well!
:D
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