 nicolerogersXX 2008-12-10 . chapter 11that was amazing, especailly the fight! xD plz update as soon as u can ^-^ |
 Oyuki 2008-12-09 . chapter 11they're strangers. but can they be strangers together? i hope the epilogue is out soon. more soon. |
 insaneteacup 2008-12-09 . chapter 11Any chance for a re-write? Last chapter was wicked awesome, with Sakura's words "I am Kazedama, too." The beginning of this chapter tied in pretty well, and the flow of the fight was spectacular. I cannot ask for anything more for the end of the fight, with her uncle's last words, and Sakura's emotional turmoil.
...However. The moment you had her jump into Naruto's arms, it went downhill from there. It feels very disjointed. I wish you could've taken the time to wind down the high from the fight. The talk with Sasuke could've waited another chapter. (Ooh, and I just realized. It says Suspense/Romance - Sakura & Sasuke for your categories. It should be Suspense/Crime/Mystery - Sakura.)
Are you planning on doing a sequel? It'd have been nice to see how Sakura copes with what she's been through, how you said her uncle's words would stay with her for years to come. |
 Blade Redwind 2008-11-01 . chapter 10Very nice. I love the plot and the characters. You've managed to capture Sakura perfectly and yet give her and extra edge I adore. Sasuke I'm not too sure about yet as I've not seen much of him in this. And yet... in many ways he's still himself.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more.
--Blade |
 Oyuki 2008-10-20 . chapter 10yay! she's going to kick butt! awesome. i love it when she does that. more soon! |
 Leigh4 2008-10-20 . chapter 10Bwahahahaha!! Go Sakura!! That is so cool, can't wait to read what will happen next. Please continue |
 nicolerogersXX 2008-10-20 . chapter 10Hellz Ya! You Go Sakura! Kick his ass! |
 somebrokenhearts 2008-08-19 . chapter 9Ohy! CLIFFY!! ah can't handle the suspense! update soon!!
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somebrokenhearts |
 Oyuki 2008-08-19 . chapter 9ok, i was with naruto on that i didn't really get it. so, i'm still there. yeah. anyway, can't wait for more! |
 whimsicaldream 2008-08-18 . chapter 9YES! SWEETNESS IS HERE! I have waited long for this update Y.Y Great chapter, as always. I *love* this story, and the only complaint that isn't really a complaint is that sasusaku is minimal. That's okay though, because the plot still kicks ass. Can't wait for the next part! |
 shkh4ever 2008-08-18 . chapter 9Thank you for the great update. This a over all wonderful fic. But is it really a Sauske & Sakura fic. If you only have 2 more chapters left, not much S&S going to happen. That's sad. |
 shkh4ever 2008-08-01 . chapter 8WOW! I LOVE YOUR FIC, JUST WOW! I AM GONG THROUGH A VERY PAINFUL TIME IN MY LIFE RIGHT NOW AND YOUR WRITING AND OTHERS ARE HELPING ME TO KEEP MY MIND BUSY AND AWAY FROM THE PAIN. I WANTED TO THANK YOU FOR YOUR TALENT. |
 whimsicaldream 2008-07-29 . chapter 5I just listened to "Someday you will be loved", and WOW. It is *such* a perfect song for this couple, really. Amazing story, by the way. A romance that actually includes suspense and makes you think?! Crazy, you know? |
 somebrokenhearts 2008-07-04 . chapter 8This is an absolutely amazing series. Your writing style and the way you portray characters is phenomenal.
The artists for the songs you used equals AWESOME! I love Death Cab for Cutie! YAY!
Update soon! XD |
 xx-tenshi-xx 2008-07-04 . chapter 8effing best storey i have ever read!! i cant beleive how cunning sakura is and that bitch kiloling her own team ? :( glad shes dead and all of konoha is going to fall but i dont get the little details of that i get sakura family but not danzou and hwo helped him and hopefully u will explain this soon and save sakura! pleae pleae update soon UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! |