That was brillant. You are a stunner youkomon.

I rather enjoyed this story. It was cute, short and believable. Sonia Strumm always seemed rather down to earth to me, but I assume you've based Misora's personality on her anime one so I can't really comment on that. Subaru's reliability, however, I can completely see.

I really, really liked how Misora proposed, though.

Funny. You have got to do something with when they have kids. XD

This is certainly an interesting take on their relationship. You're also the first one I've seen to use the characters' original names. Nonetheless, this was an interesting read.

How should I say this...

...Wow.

I never thought of them that way... I hope you won't mind if I incorporate that into my works...

Now for the review.

Even they are different in some aspects, they are able to smooth things out and become more than friends. Nice. What's really interesting is that they're much older in this fic (in their 20s, perhaps?) and they manage to act childish.

Some extremely humorous scenes... Especially your end line, as it suggested something very peculiar... XD

Having the gal propose to the guy is a surprise... A good plot twist.

Overall: Well written, with a decent plot and high level words, which leads to good details. A couple of things could have been expressed a little more, mainly the finale.

...This is a respectable piece of work. Now, if only if I could do the same for my story...