 Kyer 2008-02-14 . chapter 1I like the basics of the story even though it is a bit hard to read. Still, I can't imagine myself even attempting to write in a foreign language, so good for you. *smiles*
Just one thing though: you have ogremon and bakemon afraid of Hacked because they believe he is a virus. Both are virus champion level, so their fear doesn't make much sense to me.
Well, also, if the virus can permanently kill data and vaccine digimon-yet they are able to revert to digi eggs-then eventually there would not be any data or vaccine digimon left. Unless something is creating new vaccines and datas to replace those permanently destroyed? |