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Reviews for: Hacked Wizarmon Chap 1 and 2
Kyer
2008-02-14 . chapter 1
I like the basics of the story even though it is a bit hard to read. Still, I can't imagine myself even attempting to write in a foreign language, so good for you. *smiles*

Just one thing though: you have ogremon and bakemon afraid of Hacked because they believe he is a virus. Both are virus champion level, so their fear doesn't make much sense to me.

Well, also, if the virus can permanently kill data and vaccine digimon-yet they are able to revert to digi eggs-then eventually there would not be any data or vaccine digimon left. Unless something is creating new vaccines and datas to replace those permanently destroyed?
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