Reviews for Naruto: The End Of Solitude

Reviews For: Naruto: The End Of Solitude - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

Tyler Stipe 2008-08-17 ch 4, anon.	abusewoot! you are a great writer with a amazing vocabulary this fanfic was novel material and you did a fonaminal job
faygochick 2008-08-13 ch 4,	abusei loved your story, there was absolutely nothing wrong with it. it was really well written. it makes me jealous, Keep it up!:)
PhoenixSong4232 2008-08-10 ch 4,	abusethat was amazing! I wouldn't worry about OOCness at all if i were you, you did a great job! Gaara's hard and you pulled it off very well! Nicely done!
Sheol 2008-07-16 ch 2,	abuseGood story. You have great writing abilities, but the story is a bit... how should I put it? Wordy. It's not that it isn't well-worded, cause you are excellent at describing things, but it almost reads like a monologue. That is making it very difficult to read... and rather hard to get into.
sAMMI DA wOLF 2008-07-05 ch 4,	abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG! I found this story today and read through the whole thing satisfied that I was unable to find errors in your writing! This is one of my favorite pairings and you did the pairing much justice. I look forward to other stories!
Cee M. 2008-06-12 ch 4,	abuseamazing !! : DD*
narufangirl16 2008-06-09 ch 4,	abusecrying tears of joy Oh Gaara, Matsuri, I just new you could do it! I wonder what Gaara meant by 'next time'...
Wierdo-Lover 2008-06-08 ch 4,	abuse-teardrops- Everything was so good and well writen! Everyone was in charecter, and that totally rocked! I just wish there were more GaaMatsu fics. I know in the Naruto manga, if they all grow up in adults and stuff, The Kazakage would diffenitly have her as his spouse. No doubt. Well! Thanks for the great read! It rocked my world. Insanely.
Zephyr.Camida 2008-05-26 ch 4,	abusesighs Damn...that was probably one of THE best... and very tasteful lemons I have read...ever. I was.. very happy with the great amount of detail and it flowed really nicely...and it didn't seem to be at all vulgar. In the sense that how you described everything was so ... innocent and pure...agh. I love this fic to DEATH. And I'm glad I got to read it. This is definitely on my favorites list and I HOPE you write more of this pairing... you, awesome writer person, are teh shitz. XD I look forward to reading more of your fiction...and... (write more Gaa/Mat) Lol~
Zephyr.Camida 2008-05-26 ch 3,	abuseMew. Tender moments are the best. Quickly reading through it again...as I've read this yesterday but have yet to review...((I explained this already didn't I? XD)) But...aw...I can't wait to read the last chapter... as it is the juicy stuff...gr...let the intimacy begin. LOL Hm...she firmly held him in place eh? Go get him girl!!
Zephyr.Camida 2008-05-26 ch 2,	abuseAw...cuteness. :3 loves to death on the Naru/Hina...ness Bwaha, makes me a happy reader when something is so well written. I can really this being something like canon. That'd...be awesome. XD I am liking that you are including Gaara's duties as Kazekage...as most fics tend to really...breeze over that. But you take the cake of course!!
Zephyr.Camida 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI've already read this whole fanfic threw but it was one of those days where I had limited time... like tonight. -__-;; so I hadn't reviewed yet. XD So here I am...reviewing. Very nice starting chapter. I LOVE the fact that you go through a lot of the experiences prior to this whole shin-dig taking place...thus letting the reader really understand how these feelings are coming to be...that and it's just too damn cute and I want read this more...again. xD Sure do like them intimate moments. :D
Melanie Skye 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseglee I love this! Some of the flashbacks seem out of order, but I think that was how you meant it to be. (By the way this is one_of_dreams from livejoural, you asked me to read this. I just don't have time to read the rest right now, so I'll review every chapter. ^^ )
ShinoHina4eva 2008-05-04 ch 4,	abuse..I absolutely ADORED this story...the way you wrote Gaara's character seemed so real, so accurate...you're the first author I've read who has experimented with his lack of social skills. Kudos to you for that. It truly felt, to me at least, that you kept him consistently in character more than anyone else I've read.
Olena 2008-04-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseThe mature sceen was great! And i thought that the ending wasn't corny at all! I think the story turns out better if u dont drag it for a long time. Gaara's character was exactly the way he should be, I had a total clear picture of him in my mind as I read the story, and i too believe that Gaara should find and be loved! Matsuri sounded wonderful, and i loved how u added a little of Naruto and Hinata in there. I loved it!! I also love that you care so much about your fans and keep writing because I certainly can't wait for your next story!

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