Reviews for The first time

otakux 2008-07-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this...even though I never envisioned lind and peorth...ever. But I really like the story. The omake at the end were very cute!! you should make some more one-shots.
Mangaka in Training 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseI have one thing to say. YAH! I love this story so much! I may be kinda biased because I love the lovey-dovey smoochy stuff, but this is so warm it tugs at my heart in every sentence! I love your style of writing, and all of the description you put into each paragraph was lovely. Every romantic memory described by Lind felt so real it was as if I were watching it myself. I do have one slight negative bit... Lind seemed a bit out of character, but on the other hand, Peorth was spot on. Anyways, I'm adding this one to my favorites! Looking forward to more of your work.
Gaian Knight 2008-02-14 ch 1,	abuseAnother cool story. The Omakes are a fun read. All still shorter than I'd prefer. Keep it going there and here. =^^=