Hermione turned back to him, a soft smile just for him, "We aren't pretending anymore."

I adore that line! (:

perfect ending

"You forgot to charm your voice."

Haha! Totally cute.

The beginning is slightly OOC, or at least odd for any encounter, but the middle to end is nicely written.

(Wrong 'too':)

"too you"

"I want too"

aw i absolutely LOVE this story! it's so swet! i've read a lot of stories where it's the other way around, but i like it this way better. :]

Aw. That was really cute. I loved it.

superb putting it on my c2

perfect! a real valentine's day treat!

Why is it that the story always ends before we get to see the reactions? The reactions are the best part! But this was pretty good too...

Aww. That's so cute. :D

Good job. I'm a big fan of that pairing.