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JerseyJunk
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseJASON! =[
ix3jason.
i had a hampster once; his name was Teddy.
he died. =[
OH! and one time! my cousin brought his hapster over!
and we put it on the floor&&it ran away up the vent!
and we heard it running aroud up there for like a week.
then i guess it died, cuz we don't hear it anymore. XP
i'm surprised my house doesn't smell like decomp. Xp
Wander52
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseGreat twist on things...
Twilight-Flame337
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuselol that was great. I laughed pretty hard at certain parts. I'm glad Jason came back-if only for a short time.
hinaths
2008-02-16
ch 1,
abuseSorry to ask that but who's Jason?? I never heard of this little guy, if you could just tell me, thanks anyway for the story, it was very nice.
RenLissa
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseWell since I don't liek to be a part of the majority . . .

I loved the use of cheese in a can and spoons. So much cheese, so many spoons. And then there is a hamster, and a dead mouse. With achild and all this how the heck did the geeks find time to get busy? Cute story filled with laughs. Thanks
Dr. Temperance Brennan
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseHonestly, I didn't notice the Jason aspect until you mentioned it in the final author's note. I'm not so sure you fufilled the "geekbaby" requirement. A 5 year old child is not a baby, and though they are trying to get pregnant, she isn't, and that part was a little angsty. I guess you just couldn't stay away. Oh well, it was a nice fic, and creative.
Ming
2008-02-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's really cute. Thanks! ^_^
ishotsherlock
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abusegreat story. funny and cute. cant wait for the next one.
AKE :D
WalkerTRngr
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseAwesome!
paperback-romance
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseFunny story! I liked it!
RavennaNightwind
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseWhen I read the word "Jason" I was like "YAY!" Cute fic! Easy cheese, EW! That stuff is NASTY! haha, the hamster bit Grissom. I really like it!
The Queen of Sin
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseyay! Jason lives! Woho!...this is awesomely funny!...and Sara may get poked with a spoon for calling a Hamster a rat! *death glare*...and where the hell did you get the name "Baxter" from?

anyway...this was rather awesome...Thankning you kindly!
Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseAw. Fluffy. Thank you for brightening up my otherwise crappy and meaningless day.
SaraLou
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseOk, didn't click with the Jason thing til the end...but I realy didn't like him!

This was cute though...at least the hamster ended up in the cupboard and not in the fire like my bro's class hamster...the fire was on, but Hammy made it out alive somehow!
theyHAUNTme
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseYou got the challenge too? So did I. Joey's weird...but I love her anyways. Great story...what's easy cheese? I've never heard of it. Thank you for the cute story!:)
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