|Reviews for Firsts|
| Bella's humanity 2/14/08 . chapter 1
I don't know how you do it. Once again, you've rendered me speechless with a breath-taking story. I can feel the emotion radiating from every word. I love the way you have captured Esme and Carlisle's relationship, since we see so little of it in the books. You truly have a gift!
I don't want to seem like I'm peddling or anything, but if you happen to get a second, I wish you would read the one story I wrote, Finding Your Eternal Soulmate, just to see what you think of it. Part of it is about Esme and Carlisle. You're opinion would be greatly appreciated!
Keep on writing!
| MISSTTAYLORR 2/14/08 . chapter 1
it still amazes me how you can seem to put so much love between two people in just simple words. beautiful as always.
you should consider writing a book. i believe you would be very good at it. but then again, with two boys would you have time?
| sam 2/14/08 . chapter 1
That was beautifully written. You have such a great talent!
| she is brighter 2/14/08 . chapter 1
happy valentines tag
| btgrs 2/14/08 . chapter 1
That was amazing.
I loved how you wrote that.
It was so sweet, and moving. Esme and Carlisle are wonderful. Its so fair for them to have each other.
I just loved their first kiss. You were also great at writing their first time. So much love and passion. I love their tenderness.
Bella and Edward remind her of her own beginning? Thats great.
| ChocoMuffs 2/14/08 . chapter 1
This was such a romantic, heart breaking, amazing chapter!
I loved it completely.
ever lasting love!
| Gao Jing Ning 2/14/08 . chapter 1
very very good. you are a great writer. i felt engrossed in the story and was not interupted by writing flaws at all!
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| lizabel411 2/14/08 . chapter 1
When I opened my email and saw a new story alert I immediately went to fanfiction. I was right to rush. This is the most touching story I've ever read. It's sweet and let's me understand Carlisle and Esme a little better. It's great that this was created on Valentine's day! So cute! You already know how gifted u r! Keep it up!
| jaquisgirls 2/14/08 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. You are such a talented writer. Good job!
| electrictwizist 2/14/08 . chapter 1
Aw! Your Esme is so much better than mine. Don't get mad if my tone changes a bit in my esme story, please. X-X
| Ms. Topaz 2/14/08 . chapter 1
that was way to cute! especially for valentine's day!
loved it so much!
| GreysAutumn 2/14/08 . chapter 1
Aww! That was so cute for Valentine's Day. I'm glad you did Carlisle and Esme because their story needs to shared on here too. Loved it, like always. :]
| 72345 2/14/08 . chapter 1
I love this - it is so poignant and so beautiful - you are such a gifted writer. I'd love for you to do a full blown C/E story - you have an excellent grasp of these characters.
Hope all is going well with you - not on this front, but I had to drop a line and tell you YOU ROCK! (I know, how adult of me...) How about - YOU ROCKETH!