Ah, so mushy and amazing<3 you portrayed both sakura and sasuke wonderfully... i love it :)

well the Hyuuga charm was good luck. it saved her. Lets hope Tenten and Neji don't mind its gone =P

a little OOC, but adorable nonetheless. :) if only this would really happen! you wrote such a possible scenario, it was quite lifelike, albiet out of the personality of Uchiha Sasuke. ;) beautiful story though.

ugh. wish this wasn't one shot.T^T

aww, that was cute:P im going to pretend that interlude happens in the real thing.

Well... I have to say, I'm kind of disappointed (sp?) with the ending. It was so good when it started out, with Sakura being all kickass, and beating Sasuke down. And then it had to get all... fluffy. Blegh. The ending definitely detracted from the goodness of the story. But that's just me. Overall, it was a good story, there were a few grammatical errors (but then again, who am I to talk?) But I did enjoy it. Please continue to write stories for Sasusaku fans like me (just try to tone down the fluff, I'm pretty sure I got, like, 10 cavities from all the sweetness in the ending) Sasuke was a little OOC at the end (I mean, all the kissing? He doesn't really seem like a character who's big on PDA) I loved how you portrayed Sakura's character in the beginning, but towards the end... She changed. She became less independant, and more like her twelve year old self.

Anyways, I really did enjoy this story! Thanks for posting it for people like me to read!
This is in no way a flame, and I hope this doesn't offend.

-Bibsa1

*Tiny squeal* Sighs. Wonderful, as ever. And yes, he did, but it's Valentine's day! Well, supposed to be anyways.

Great job!

Annie

I love this short yet very romantic (in a ninja way,I guess?!)story!
Thank you for a wonderful Sasu-Saku Story!
I always enjoy a good love story about them (only them).

So fluffy and actiony! It was so good! Here's a cookie for you, since you write such awesome stories!(gives you giant cookie in the shape of the Hyuuga symbol) BYE!! : )

Suh-weet!
I love you so, so much! (Though I may have said that quite a lot of time already.)
Never stop writing,
~dawnblossoms

That's so SWEET!

uhm... wow.

When he said "Wait for me," that touched my heart but when he said "I love you," that just brought me to tears. Amazing job, loved the details along with the battlescenes and lets not forget the romance! Wow and thank you :)

So good! I loved it so much-you did an amazing job! I know you're a good writer but that was outstanding. Keep up the godd work and great job!

...yeah...he did get a little out of character...

considering he was trying to kill her and then he decided to kiss her...

(a little could be blamed on POSSESSIVE!Sasuke, but...)

...but it isn't too bad! (I like the ring idea. Tradition is nice! as well as the fact that he didn't come back, because that would have been too much.
...
I guess Sasuke will have to tell Orochimaru that the ninja had died...
...and Saku-chan will be in trouble when Neji finds out...)