 kara 12/26/11 . chapter 1 naruto |
 lexandra 12/19/11 . chapter 1 cute! Lemon action There!:)great Job! |
 Pred 6/28/11 . chapter 1 Pretty nice story 3 |
 alexis 6/19/11 . chapter 1 that was god but i didn't let my little 1 year old brother read it |
 ShadowX 2/10/11 . chapter 1 Damn dude this was awesome |
 lokixlucy 3/24/10 . chapter 1 u cant say that cause love is not like that |
 reaperofsouls18 10/16/08 . chapter 1nicely done i enjoyed reading it _ |
 Namine Uzumaki 7/7/08 . chapter 1 GREAT STORY! Totally loved it. Hope u dont think im a pervert for it. Anyway its me NaruSakuFan4Life. The girl u met on youtube. |
 boy mjg 3/1/08 . chapter 1 you actually managed to make a lemon have a good background story good job |
 Tomahawk 3.0 2/27/08 . chapter 1It was a bit confusing, but it was really good! |
 FishyCrackers431 2/22/08 . chapter 1I wasn't really feeling it here, i like the idea of it but personally i just didn't like how you put it down in words. |
 ColetteUzumaki 2/20/08 . chapter 1Really nice Valentine's Day story! |
 Kalypso-Fox 2/18/08 . chapter 1so sweet (sniffle) |
 andriod84 2/15/08 . chapter 1 yer it me again...your story was a tad too short but i did like it great work as usual *dose Guy's pose and teeth shine* |
 Frozen-Tundra88 2/15/08 . chapter 1This was great! Truly worthy of Valentine's Day! |