 HalliwellMB 3/30/10 . chapter 3wow that was so much information! |
 HalliwellMB 3/30/10 . chapter 2good idea! |
 HalliwellMB 3/30/10 . chapter 1ยก? |
 Susan 7/12/03 . chapter 4 This is a great story. I can't wait to read the rest of the series. |
 Kurt Uhlig 11/28/02 . chapter 4 Chapter 3 is the same as chapter 2 |
 eriks-fabulous-chick 8/26/02 . chapter 4wow that was cool. I felt like i was actually watching the show, good job. |
 Charmedchic72 7/18/02 . chapter 4Chapter 3&4 were the same...but other then that small mistake i was totally great |
 Piper Elizabeth 4/22/02 . chapter 2 i loved this storie it's brill.
Piper Eizabeth |
 JC 9/22/01 . chapter 1 Great story! Where's the end of the story? Please write some more and have the girls vanquish the demon and find out Prue's big secret! |
 Charmed 9/20/01 . chapter 2 I love this so far! I need more ASAP! |
 Cordelia Cat 9/19/01 . chapter 1Next chapter I wanna find out what she's hiding, yo! |