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| AnOrExIcFaTtY 2008-06-16 ch 2,  | abuselol. UPDATE! |
| AnOrExIcFaTtY 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseawe. so sweet. what book did it say he had the 3-pronged mark?? |
| DevilsAngelSaphire 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseyou should update! It's really good. I love it! |
| SnowBabyWolf18 2008-04-01 ch 2, | abusei love it its just the the real chronicles of darkness with torak and renn |
| renn and torak 4eva 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseawesome story plz keep writig make it a luv story! so good:o renn and torak 4eva |
| Hazelstar 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseOk,food story,I'm a fan of Torack/Renn,they're so cute together! Nina:OMG,Hazel thinks somethings is cute,the world has come to an end!*runs around in circles* Hazel:*looks at Michelle*How much suger did she eat? Michelle:About 10 lbs. Yeah,random,but my friends are watching me.Update soon! |
| 5redroses 2008-03-12 ch 2, | abuseOh my gosh, there's a category for chronicals of ancient darkness, i emailed a while ago to ask for one! Nice banter between characters although it could do with developing. Also, did you mean "touchy?" "Touché" means "oh yeah, i guess I am being a bit of a hypocrite" but this doesn't quite make sense in the sentence you put it in. Sorry for sounding so critical! : ) |
| Insert Lame Name Here 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting...update soon! |
| Windracer leopard 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseVery nice, good start. The world needs a little more Torak/Renn. And by a little I mean alot! But this is good. |
| SpiritOfSherwood 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseHm Good writing but I can't really simulate a Torak/Renn relationship mainly because it seems to be onesided for Torak. I'll just have to wait and see if Michelle Paver makes them fall in love. Otherwise, good The Spirit |
| TheManyFacesOfMe 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! I wonder if Michelle P will have them end up together... Mayex is a nice invention, and the storyline (as yet) is good. Write more! |