 MikoKagome1113 2008-10-01 . chapter 1Aw, i thought it would be longer! It didn't really give off a point to me other then Touya had a sister complex, but it needed to show WHY he had one.
~Miko |
 KiAnson 2008-06-17 . chapter 1 this is so cute!
poor Syaoran and Sakura...
Touya should focus on his love life...
kudos on the cute and funny fic |
 Sheiryy 2008-03-04 . chapter 1Short.
But so cute!! >_< You just gotta love Touya ne~? x33
Haha Love the Touya punch bag :D But I would never hit him!! :O |
 SparklingStar25 2008-02-26 . chapter 1this was so funny!and cute! |
 Mellie Erdmann 2008-02-15 . chapter 1Hi!
Aaw, that was so kawaii! I'm adding it to my favorites. Very good work.
Hm. Touya's last name is Kinomoto, though. Not that it matters much, it's such a funny drabble anyway!
Huuge sister complex, ne, Touya-san?
Cheers!
~Mellie~ |
 ~harmnoy~ 2008-02-15 . chapter 1 That was so sweet!! :D |
 insideout Ellie 2008-02-14 . chapter 1 If this had been part of a longer story, with more description it would have been good.
But to put it on it's own, was just far too short, only 170 words, to me that cannot even be called a one shot...
I don't mean to be sound rude, but come on, 170 words? You could do much better. |
 AngelEmCuti 2008-02-14 . chapter 1cute^^ |
 Danielle 2008-02-14 . chapter 1 Ahahaha, so true. Wow, two years yet you were able to make everyone perfectly IC! Good job! The only mistake is that Sakura's last name is "Kinomoto". But, again, that's a minor error in a funny drabble. :D |